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Old 04-04-03, 05:33 PM   #1
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Writers Block...

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Alot of QUOTE... UNQUOTE writers out there... got beef with Av... Why is that..?! Cause you see what you should be eh..? Fuckin chumps...


GOOD FUCKING MORNING..!


we walk the same streets, talk over the same beats,
I'm eracist... if I was you we'd walk and talk all in the same sheets...
think about it... I didn't say shit, I came in humble,
scream without it... bitches brought kid squak to royyal rumbles...
trouble got cha out ya right mind, guess creativity left,
if skills were lung capacity... you'd all die from lack of breath...
when ya life's on the line, just forget, it ya gone,
time is opposed to all sides, step past, best not even choose it...
emcees stuck at the beginning, the war is on,
Names mentioned, Fames given, by ya boy's right Ruthless..!?
I don't give two fucks now, Av's tired of bullshit Dizzy,
opinions aint worth shit, with the way the value of dollars drop really...
Quickly, ya fans feel me, You better tuck ya chest in,
Ego's like yours aren't worthy without war with vets how you step it..?!
Av's sick and twisted, Dizz quickly lifted to skies,
Ruthless puttin his life up... HOW YOU EXPECTIN TO WIN WITH LIES..?!


(hook)
I never been to the hood... Guess I'm quite LIKE YOU!
I want to be a lyrical gangsta JUST LIKE YOU..!
Av reps lyricists... OF COURSE WE ALL HATE YOU,
Keep it off the streets... leave it RAPPED on paper JUST LIKE YOU...
I never been to the hood... Guess I'm quite LIKE YOU!
I want to be a lyrical gangsta JUST LIKE YOU..!
Av reps lyricists... OF COURSE WE ALL HATE YOU,
Keep it off the streets... leave it RAPPED on paper JUST LIKE YOU...


Next to win... Av's known as best again,
GOT THESE BITCHES WORKIN MY NERVES like Slave labor and mexicans...
NO ONE believes in you, NO ONE believes you've murdered crews,
if these members are workin for lyricists, we all fired, merked and desterted TOO..!
waved bye to reality a long time ago, see-
in lines Av's all dope like Darryl Strawberry use to be...
Gangsta's aint LYRICAL... They go out kill people,
I see the trust funds in ya eyes, wide as windows, you so see through...
bunches of multis, something probably said wrong,
lunches of poultry, swear I never saw two men in mini skirts and thongs...
Everyone knew D wanted respect to come from this shit,
NO ONE EVER expected you to run away from it kid...
count the times I said kid, Grown men just turned adolescents,
on second thought, I saw what ya'll brought, been there for some seconds...
Beef? no... Just had to speak hoes, speak to foes and be out,
cuz my dick is the flag pole hangin from the roof of they mouths...


(hook)
I never been to the hood... Guess I'm quite LIKE YOU!
I want to be a lyrical gangsta JUST LIKE YOU..!
Av reps lyricists... OF COURSE WE ALL HATE YOU,
Keep it off the streets... leave it RAPPED on paper JUST LIKE YOU...
I never been to the hood... Guess I'm quite LIKE YOU!
I want to be a lyrical gangsta JUST LIKE YOU..!
Av reps lyricists... OF COURSE WE ALL HATE YOU,
Keep it off the streets... leave it RAPPED on paper JUST LIKE YOU...


These fucks done bitched twice, all evil... aint never been nice,
crossin they own words, thinkin they GOD in CHRIST...
two speech impedements... now thinkin they studs,
st-st-st-studderin retirees... used to never be thugs...
Sell drugs..? I got a sack for ya,
We can go straight to the hood where my niggas'll REALLY clap for ya...
I won't roll up and steal you... won't drive by and kill you,
guess what... I lied... like everyone that says, "DIZZ I feel you"...
only two cats to ever step in line to be clowned,
been workin on ya 7th album for years... career still to be announced...
news coverage, they fleed in fear, dread they tears,
they Sadaam of the rap game alright... BEEN DEAD FOR YEARS..!
I wake up Ruthless screams... FEAR HAS RISEN,
Dizz rep for Al Quaida... only cause terrors-in-him...
Put on ya skirts... with Av ya dates are set,
clear ya calendars... that's what happens when you flirt with death...


(hook)
I never been to the hood... Guess I'm quite LIKE YOU!
I want to be a lyrical gangsta JUST LIKE YOU..!
Av reps lyricists... OF COURSE WE ALL HATE YOU,
Keep it off the streets... leave it RAPPED on paper JUST LIKE YOU...
I never been to the hood... Guess I'm quite LIKE YOU!
I want to be a lyrical gangsta JUST LIKE YOU..!
Av reps lyricists... OF COURSE WE ALL HATE YOU,
Keep it off the streets... leave it RAPPED on paper JUST LIKE YOU...



Worthless punks... All that bullshit ya'll spoke...


Put ya 3 pennies together... get half a fuckin opinion...










Avalon...
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Old 04-04-03, 05:53 PM   #2
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nice drop dunn...

now be a good lil' boy and record it like you said you were
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Old 04-04-03, 06:08 PM   #3
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lmao... will do...
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Old 04-05-03, 09:37 AM   #4
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avalon 1 word ILL
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Old 04-05-03, 07:19 PM   #5
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hot shit...
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Old 04-05-03, 10:25 PM   #6
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thas hott! *hands down*
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Old 04-05-03, 10:30 PM   #7
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ur a cocky bastard...lol...j/k
I really liked this line:

"Next to win... Av's known as best again,
GOT THESE BITCHES WORKIN MY NERVES like Slave labor and mexicans..."

I liked the feelin in that line
I also really liked the hook
it would be a great audio
I lost the flow a couple of times tho
but that was the only problem I could
think of, and I really had to think

PS peep my "7deadly rap"
thx
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Old 04-06-03, 05:06 PM   #8
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will do...
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Old 04-08-03, 12:20 AM   #9
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achoo...
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Old 04-08-03, 12:30 AM   #10
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tight verse avalon,fuck commerical rap straight out foreal,i feel you on this one totally,shit would sound tight as fuck on audio witha hot ass beat,made me laugh in parts...propz...
bismillah
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Old 04-08-03, 06:57 AM   #11
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never read any of ya other pieces before so i dunno if sum heads got beef wiv ya but if they have then they stupid cos this piece showin sum true skills. ya flow was heavy and ya vocab was nice. topic wise u showin fools your true self. honestly this was tight i aint got no real criticisms of it.

ANYWAY RETURN THE FAVOUR CHECK MINE BANGKOK BUSINESS aight peace
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