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Old 04-08-03, 06:34 AM   #1
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Yo, this is my first Audio ever, its pretty sketchy coz I'm not too good with the editing side of things but just lookin fo y'all to give me some pointers and that....

http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?ID=298189&q=Lo

http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?ID=298189&q=Hi

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Old 04-08-03, 02:21 PM   #2
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delievery was a little off beat, good concept for a track though, the intro was blurred as fuck, there were a few good lines in this, but dont force your lines to fit the beat if they dont. either edit your lines or slow the beat down.
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Old 04-09-03, 02:58 AM   #3
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ur speech was nice dogg, this is yo best one i've heard fo sure man.. keep workin wit yo rhymes, the only thing was the part at the start, it just sounded blurred.. duno wat happened but still keep workin this shit ! peace out !
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Old 04-09-03, 03:59 AM   #4
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nice drop dawg.....I agree bout tha linez bein rushed, but u still got your point across cool. Bill clinton was hella distorted at tha strat, but nice lyricz and concept
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haha yeah I dunno how to do the tempo independently so the clinton thing had to stay at the same temp as the beat which was much too slow for the Clinton thing and when its at the wrong temp, it gets heaps blurry, but anyway, thanks for tha looks!

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Old 04-12-03, 09:04 AM   #6
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