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Old 04-17-03, 05:59 AM   #1
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staring down the eyes of a colonizer

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personal strifes
snake to my mindstate, a rehersal for life
fates my blind date, too late not to be alone in this long fight
an enclosed Jinn, within my own skin
withhold the truth fortold to win
to selfish to help this hellish cause
im willing to kill with my own paws
an animal, words handled my mandibles
from creed of man to stand, on these few strands of land
began ways to banish you
cant understand your language tools or politics
cribs rearranged to apartments from plains of sand dunes
my people stand too straight not to have you
in the present like gifts, the present mic shifts
live the plight sent of rivers, my plans are bigger
dont label me a terrorist or sand nigger
im more than a flick of fear
hold your beer and liquor
wanna stop livin here with the sickest sinners
apraise my own race in zealous
crooked bloodline like sickle cell
my inners...have been thru hell
veteran beduans compete for the title thats built on deciet
refuse to feed starving children the concieve
no hopes for peace
while the truest walk with no hoods and bare feet
my people throw hooks like choruses for they own nooses
soldiers choose us as thy source of endless spendin
the outcome of the sentence is pendin
with bretheren suicidals is a defensive preference
trends of desendants, is that we should seek self and repentance...
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Old 04-17-03, 10:49 AM   #2
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Old 04-17-03, 01:53 PM   #3
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phew... you are going to be the death of my eyes.. yup you sure are... the long ass poems..have you ever tried to write a short one? That should be a goal write a good short peom lol.. I liked this piece also... it kind of threw me off at points but that was all. OoNnEe
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Old 04-18-03, 06:17 AM   #4
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lol...you know thats the way i express myself...thru writing i have some short poems but i threw them out cuz i thought they didnt express the meaning i wanted to get thru well enough...anyways good looking out...wahid
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