Home Life Was Spectacular To Tha Very Meaning Of Significance..
My Mother Was A Grade A Labourer That Kept Us Above Deficiance..
Tha Recipiant Of Luck And Tha Robust Keeper Of That Accolade..
Our Life was As Common As Something Envisioned On Happy Days..
As My Daddy Played Tha Role Of An Innocuous And Also Sympathetic..
Tha Lead Descendent Who Protected Our Family Like An Eclectic..
I Was Elected Tha Highest Position In My Class At High School..
It Seemed Like That Wherever I Steped Foot Rays Of Light Fall..

Beyond Tha Mirror Seedy Bars Are Graced By My Fathers Presence..
Indulging All Remorse Through A Shot Glass And Vast Deception..
Misguided Directions And Career Sackings Have Got Me Back Packing..
Across These Departed Terrains All Because Exactness Was Lacking..
Sentiment Was Cracking And Happiness Was Always Non-Existant..
You Could Murder Sacred Entities By Just Hearing Our Description..
Denial Eclipse'd My Mother Through Which Her Mental State Fell..
Drug Consumption And This Charlatan Was Tha Epitome Of Betrayal..

My Neighbours Are Tha Most Constructive People On This Earth..
And Tha Local Populous Animate Disregarding Tha Minimal Worst..
Everyone Works Hard And Leave Mind's Open Towards Suggestions..
Even Tha Destitute Are Making Moves And Eventually Progressing..
To Tha Apex Of Hierarchies Of Discretion And Proving Us Wrong..
That Not Only Tha Deeply Depressed Can Manifest Moving Songs..
Perfection For A Tourist As Tha Hospitality Is Fully Expressive..
Could You Imagine A Society Where No Hostility Is Detected?..

Beyond Tha Mirror Ignorance Breathes Souls In This Metropolis..
Adults Act In Verbal And Physical Abuse Against Their Foster Kids..
Lost In Tha Mist Of Human Rights They'd Rather Choose To Fight..
Against Their Own Bloodline Untill Their Eyes Are An Immoral Sight..
Tha Vagrant Vacate And Congest Tha Sidewalk Seeking For Pittance..
First Place To Look If You Have A Child Thats Run Off And Is Missing..
Pestilence And Famine, Hobos Hungry For Another Drive By Shooting..
How This State Of Emergency Rose Is Senseless And Highly Confusing..

LoL...Ol' Skool Piece Ive Never Posted Before(Well On Here)

I liked this a lot. The polarized views made me think, and beyond the mirror was a good metaphor. Good vocab, but maybe too bood at times, cuz some of the words made the flow a bit off. You kept a good scheme with the couplets, but sometimes they didn't rhyme. I felt it thought.
Peace

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Life isn't a bitch...
she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

shit was hot dog

Taken from Merriam-Webster's online site:

"The word you've entered isn't in the dictionary. Click on a spelling suggestion below or try again using the Dictionary search box to the right.

Suggestions for deficiance:
1. diffusions
2. deficients
3. deficient
4. difference
5. difference
6. defacing
7. diffidence
8. defeasance
9. defeatures
10. defections"

Seems Dictionary.com is hating on you, as the word "Deficiance" you used doesn't exist, dude.

No entry found for Deficiance.
56 suggestions found:

Dapsang
Davy Jones
Davy Jones's locker
debasement
debasing
defacement
deficiency
deficiency disease
deficient
defusing
deviousness
devising
diapason
diapason stop
dibucaine
diffuse nebula
diffuseness
diffusing
diffusing screen
diffusion
diffusion pump
Dipogon
Dipogon lignosus
dipsomania
dipsomaniac
division
division Anthophyta
division Archaebacteria
division Bryophyta
division Chlorophyta
division Chrysophyta
division Cyanophyta
division Cynodontia
division Dicynodontia
division Eubacteria
division Euglenophyta
division Eumycota
division Gymnomycota
division Gymnospermophyta
division Heterokontophyta
division Lichenes
division Magnoliophyta
division Myxomycota
division Phaeophyta
division Protista
division Pteridophyta
division Rhodophyta
division Schizophyta
division Spermatophyta
division Tracheophyta
divisional
dobson
dobson fly
dobsonfly
dovishness
dubiousness

way to say exactly the same thing as dominon, vanilla.

I guess this is an up for you N-demik

__________________
Life isn't a bitch...
she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

Actually, if you'll look at the post times, he was like a minute ahead of me while I made sure I was accurate with what I said.

Do your homework, or next time I take yo ass to school.

get the fuck out of here you little faggots.

ROFLMAO..

Don't You Just Love It When Kids Don't Understand A Word And Have To Use Dictionary.com And Try To Prove They're Smarter Than You..?

Tha Point To This Is That...It Was Actually A Typo...I Must Have Missed It All Those Months Ago.. "Deficiant"..I Bet You Don't Even Know What It Means..

So If You Not Gonna Leave Something Productive, Don't Freepost In My Thread.

dude this was flawless for realz

LMFAO! So true.. I felt as though as it were a typo and .... lol, too funny man,



Probably my favortive lines out of the entire piece man, flow was straight and had troubles going off balance, vocab was aight, nothing too spetacular , you can sorta tell that this piece is a bit different from your older piece due to it's lack of complexity you have now and the typos...heh, Overall this piece was solid around all edges, I likes...


love...

Nice drop, I read it and shit was put together nicely. The meaning of it was tight too. Good shit!


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