My brain's an indestructable masterlock//
With the abstract thoughts of an astronaut, smokin' on crack and pot//
Rap cannot change, its impossible dude//
Like Elvis sitting in the blue lagoon, attempting to solve a rubix cube//
I contusion crews while the music moves and confusion rules//
I'm like the 1972 Dolphins, 'cuz I refuse to lose//
Sending this blueprint through, formatting telepathic architecture//
Cerebellums won't register, so the lyrics cause hearts to sever//
Colder than Fargo weather, i'm dark, remember?//
M.C. for life, like Bam Margera been doing shopping carts forever//
The brain's scarred with letters, flipped, and expressed verbally//
'Cuz i'm like Hercules, certainly murdering brain waves internally for eternity//

this was alot better than ya other piece. lots of good multies in this and it flowed well. ya vocab was tight too. anyway like i said return the favour and check my collab wit jonny 6 feet. 1

nice dawg.. stay'n up as usual, you had some pretty safe multis in there. nice similes too..

"Sending this blueprint through, formatting telepathic architecture//
Cerebellums won't register, so the lyrics cause hearts to sever//
Colder than Fargo weather, i'm dark, remember?// "

^ nice..

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