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04-12-03, 05:07 PM | #1 | ||||||
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Middle east - well sorta
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gotta take credit for all the advice I recieve/
It has him that said and done it - not me/ while you was discussing peace treaty tactic's/ I was dropping bombs on tel-aviv/ Cos i'm as smart as plato and Socrates/ Lyrical supremist like the incrediable B.I.G/ Bush is now desisive of what to do with al Queda/ There not coming, there already here - exposing our fear/ while were all waiting on the king of rap to reappear (pac)/ I'm persueding satan to fuck the calender year (fuck that)/ and bring armageddon forward - bring this pit downward/ surly we cannot accept these unfair commandments/ so we can join saddam and get commended to fight/ fight off the allied invaders - they ain't crusaders/ pretty soon they gonna pay us - for all the pain they caused/ so they better get outta sight - my collition won't pause/ till they feel the might of Osama - it ain't a federal crime/ that i gotta pick controverisal subject in order to rythme/ Maybe i'm more than the sign of the devil/ One day i'll have my 15 minutes to shine - wait till the time/ and when that monmentuous day in your like comes/ You'll shrivel up worse than a 5 year old prune/ listen up ya'll - that day is coming SOON! |
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04-12-03, 06:23 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 5153 3B92
u had a nice topic but i just wasn't feelin ya still. ya rhymes were off in alot of spots. maybe this would've been better in audio. work on ya vocab and rhymescheme. keep spittin and elevatin. 1
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04-13-03, 06:20 AM | #3 | ||||||
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o.k..thanx...
I'm finding myself writin stuff like everyday now, so i should hopefully be elevatin' soon |
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04-13-03, 10:15 AM | #4 | |||||||
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aight i wasnt feelin this too...like my man up there said nice topic but where you were goin with it just blew my mind...i'm Middle Eastern and i like the concept of your rhyme but you coulda done better with choosin your words and rhyme scheme...keep elevatin, and peep my Middle East shit...its called One Way Conversation...one
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