its simple but good. something you could rhyme to with out the beat taking over. and i think i did a better job of mixing this time it doesnt sound like a bunch of noise mixxed together

if you got good lyrics it would make the beat sound even better LOL

lo-fi
http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?ID=316304&q=Lo

hi-fi
http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?ID=316304&q=Hi

^^^^hey i fucked up on my title LOL

.....what do you guys think?

theres something off with this....its like hesitating to come in.....

are u using loops?

and if so...is the bpm correct? on fruity loops...

it sounds like u are using a drum loop at say 90bpm (i duno)...and a guitar loop also at 90 bpm....but fruity is set on like 91 bpm...lol...so thers that one beat thats makin it sound retarted...

fix that...

and simply putting a guitar loop on a drum loop is not creative man....



.pz.

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LOL im new sorry in not a super producer like you this is only my 2nd attempt at making a beat.

well what bmp should it beat at that makes it sound nice?

LMAO my BMP on fruity loops was at 140....i changed it to 84 it sounds alot better...thanks DJX,

i think its good, producers should stick to keeping it raw like this instead of making it all fancy, itd sound better with lyrics on then most beats in here
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^^^yea thats the way i feel. im not into having 1000 diffrent noises to show off your skills , id rather have something you could rhyme to and stay on beat.

nah...all im sayin is throwing a drum loop over a instrument loop, is not producin....

and u can get more creative...

.pz.

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