this is a battle track i did at rapcityz.com againt some cat who no showed so i never really got replys for it.

all i wanna know is what y'all think about the punchlines and any other aspect of it.


lofi - hifi - to download it go to the site, it's called vs. Ghost

peace, i'll return the favor

dude, UMMMMMMMMM........PUNCHES WERE KINDA butt......aplause was corny and ya flow was way to soft for a battle without hot punches.........i dont know if this was a freestyle it wasn't terrible
man U GOT NO FLOW no scheme, jus sounds like ur tryin to B-rabbit it but ah NO....make sure its from the heart and U GOTTA PUT YA STAMP OF OO'INALITY ON IT YAKNOW

Yeah gotta agree with David to a degree man, pretty short, and the only real mention of a punch was at the end when that dude says PUNCHLINE anyway get more of that into it and for a battle you gotta speak with more authority kinds thing man, just put more power and shit, nah mean......

Peace Out Yo!!!!

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