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04-18-03, 11:29 AM | #1 | ||||||
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.War.
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This joint is about that war in Iraq. Don't get a nigga wrong, i'm glad we bombed them bitch asses, but certain shit about it is wrong... peep this.
Now who's really down for murder and war// Burners and swords, many lives turnin' up lost// Many nights of flying bullets, fleeing soldiers// Kids get hit, mothers too, we live this shit// Getting older, the men who ride the frontline// Die first... promised to rise when sun shines// Fine dirt awaits the arrival of my hearse// Diverse creations erased from the Bible, cursing Satan// They replace 'em with nonsense, saying bomb threats...// Aren't to spite the beast, but for foreign conquest// Despite belief of timeless war, fuckin' police// Train harder, simple minded cats catch brain trauma// And that's that government plan that had us niggas...// Running from vans with bagged crack stuck in they pants// Designed to be scared of Arabs, fear they bad rap// We built half the nation, now we want half back// Peep the bigger picture nigga, fuck satan's reperation// Study knowledge of self, fight the people's deprevation// Of knowledge that's held in jail cells where bail ain't about a check// These cats think they're holdin' all us niggas back// |
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04-18-03, 11:53 AM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 1769 3B0F
one of the illest taps into realistic life i have ever seen
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04-18-03, 02:00 PM | #3 | ||||||
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.Thanks.
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Good lookin' out kid. Keep uppin' this joint y'all... makes a nigga feel good when his peers give him good feedback, feel me?
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04-18-03, 03:22 PM | #4 | ||||||
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IP: E2EE 59B6
I liked it... it had some truth in it which made it what it is. OoNnEe.. nice work.
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04-18-03, 06:16 PM | #5 | ||||||
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IP: B14D FC00
i read the intro.. and stopped
you're lame as hell dawg give it up, put the mic down, stop scribblin with the pencil it's over |
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04-18-03, 07:41 PM | #6 | |||||||
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DAMN...............Nice piece enig.....deffinitly......
peep mine ~my Thoughts As A Man~
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04-18-03, 08:25 PM | #7 | ||||||
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IP: 45D1 EC76
the rhyme had a solid connection with current affairs. good job tapping the relevence. i lost the flow and rhyme scheme in a couple of the lines but overall a fine spit.
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04-18-03, 08:54 PM | #8 | |||
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this was a nice spit, but I got lost more than once. You had me with the war bit at the beginnin, and when you related it to street shit...but then I was like...WHAT? anyway, maybe it was just too deep for me. I'll read it a few more times.
Peace
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