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Old 05-16-03, 01:36 PM   #1
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.Phoenix of Rap.

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The prophesized child, returned in the flesh//
Learned from the best, rap lyrics burned in my chest//
Yearned for a test, god's confirmed the request//
But all were devoured as the entire earth was impressed//
Spits come off a split tongue like a lizard's//
Vocabulary magic, shit spun like a wizard//
A therapudic adventure, amusement through pleasure//
No biting, so I require a removal of dentures//
Since my arrival no rival has been worthy of the title//
So I attack practical talk with magical thoughts//
Only a few have proven they can last at the top//
While my words have tied tongues in actual knots//
Practice a lot, if you got a plan to be great//
A word slip to one prick will get you slammed on ya face//
Chipped teeth and mince meat, i've made of average heads//
It's an easy decision in a battle for bread//
This isn't a rap game, it's money and food//
So I put serious hurt on the funniest dudes//
One day i'll bruise all those who keep tryin' ta match this//
Curse their names, burst into flames and rise from my ashes//
Although it seems impossible, best believe that i'm back//
Reborn from my own coals, the phoenix of rap//
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Old 05-16-03, 01:38 PM   #2
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damn the flow was off the chain i just still dont quite get what your subject is just saw a buncha dope punchs and got caught in the flow i mean it was very nice i liekd this peice bookmarked it too


This isn't a rap game, it's money and food//
So I put serious hurt on the funniest dudes//
One day i'll bruise all those who keep tryin' ta match this//
Curse their names, burst into flames and rise from my ashes//


flow was intense there ^^^

damn hot drop
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Old 05-16-03, 01:56 PM   #3
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as always i loved this
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Old 05-16-03, 03:57 PM   #4
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yeah, dawg, A spit!

So I attack practical talk with magical thoughts//
Only a few have proven they can last at the top//
While my words have tied tongues in actual knots// - hot
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Old 05-16-03, 05:07 PM   #5
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this was ill, man
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Old 05-16-03, 08:38 PM   #6
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I loved it man......great flow, simple, concise, I'd only say it maybe needed a few more metas....but I'm a metanut......9.5/10
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Old 05-19-03, 09:35 AM   #7
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.Uppin'.

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Uppin' this joint...
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Old 05-19-03, 11:07 AM   #8
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Only a few have proven they can last at the top//
While my words have tied tongues in actual knots//
Practice a lot, if you got a plan to be great//
A word slip to one prick will get you slammed on ya face//
Chipped teeth and mince meat, i've made of average heads//
It's an easy decision in a battle for bread//


See I liked this piece, Im not a hater, I just dont like re-remix of other people's shit, It's jus not my liking, But props to you Enig on this shit, Good drop
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