I guess I'll start my freestyle first/ I'll beat your ass then roll you in the dirt/ I'll kick you where you know it'll hurt/ you're lucky I didn't mess you up with the worst/ I'm known by everyone/ I was born under the sun/ I'm the best I'm number one/ and I won't stop until I'm done/ My middle name is pain/ My last name is insane/ I'll kick you in your skull/ and fuck you up in the brain/ I speak my mind/ I speak it all the time/ I blow up the spot when I rhyme/ I lay people to rest/ It's like I'm commiting a crime/ I got the game on lockdown/ everyone is hooked on my crazy sound/ you don't want to play around/ cause I'll put your ass six feet underground/ I'm the best on this planet/ Don't take me for granted/ This rap game I ran it/ And I left your jaw slanted/ I left the game twisted/ and I'm the only one who could fix it/ I'm the one with that crazy shit/ and I'm the only baddest bitch/ I run the streets/ My flow is hotter then the beat/ Chicken and beef I like to eat/ My game is hotter then the Miami Heat/ I'm the number one stunna and I don't play/ slangin' niggas is what I do all day/ I'm the best in here/ That's what they all say/ And I fuck up niggas when I don't get my way/ Your rap skills are weak as hell/ Your albums don't even sell/ Now your stuck in jail/ Cause you couldn't pay your bail/ I blow niggas away with my sweet kiss/ makes all the bitches want to piss/ I'm bouncing so I can listen to my Ludacris/ You can all go now cause y'all bitches are dismissed/

nice joe, work a little on ur flow...try not to bunch it all up like that either...keep spittin homie

There were a few good lines in there.. you have a different style which is appreciated. Try to work on vocabualry and you flow. OoNnEe