Yo, here's another song of mine, called "Gladiator." ENJOI!!!

http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?ID=304608&q=Lo

http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?ID=304608&q=Hi

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intro is pritty deep, lol

i love that beat, you need to work on your flow quite a bit and your emotion, your quality is cool enouth, and lyrics were pritty decent. keep doing your thing tho and return the favor please

i loved that beat when BIZZY USED IT...

u kinda ruined it......man it jus sounds like u readin shit offa piece of paper


THIS IS RHYMIN BUT NOT HIPHOP......dude ya quality is good but u jus got no presense


sound like %90 of the shit i see on the net

MAN PUT YA HEART INTO IT

no dis. jus GET A STYLE i couldn't tell if u was tryin to put a hook in it or what

not hapnin tho man

U NEED ENERGY period

Yeah, u know I've only even been writing for a month so I am VERY new to this shit so any crticism is due, I do need work on hook's....any good advice on em????

Peace Out Yo!!!!

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I just updated it, I think its much better, tell me what y'all think...

Peace Out Yo!!!!

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