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Old 04-19-03, 11:13 PM   #1
nevergoin2die
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Chains

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youve heard my story but u dont kno my pains
u kno what i got but u dont kno my gains, and u dont kno my shames
you aint played my games,and u have no idea how bad i wanna bust these chains
i wanna get outta my life, finally be free
i'm not who u think i am i'm not what u see
you may of met bandit but u aint never met me
and i dont like the person i'm starting to be
feel liek everyting in the world i either fuck up or ruin
my raps got people booing, dont mind me i'm just spewin
just gettin shit off my chest, getthing things out in the open
i'll never feel like this again, atleast thats that i am hoping
but i'ms ick of moping, i'ma get off my ass, tired of not being fast tried of comin in last,
but i'm gonan get get movin, i'ma break outta this body cast
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Old 04-20-03, 12:33 AM   #2
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your real good at the heart felt shit... thats good.. OoNnEe
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Old 04-21-03, 10:20 AM   #3
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it was nice man but mad short
straight poetry man u should finish it
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