this is the second part to i lost my mind so give me feedback


now you niggas are lookin at me like i lost control/
i could never win or gain power like bob dole/
all my life i've never been accepted i've always been rejected/
i don't think once i've ever been respected/
you already saw me explode you didn't like the results at the end/
nigga i'm the real thing i ain't gotta pretend/
there's nothin i could do about it/
all you hatin niggas pushed me to end of my wits/
i already told you once i'm sick of this shit/
i'm similar to a cat i have nine lives/
i've been stabbed several times with different knives/
better think twice if you think i'm afraid of death/
i'll be ready to go when it's my very last breath/
you ain't thinkin straight comin around me not wearin a vest/
no doubt without hesitation i'll put a bullet hole in ya chest/
fuck you if you think i need help i ain't goin to a mental institute/
before i go i'll randomly execute every prostitute/
the truth comes out i'm a lunatic a freak show/
and i ain't ashamed cus i'm a psycho/

this was somethin i just came up with so give me feedback

peace

uppin

don't be sleepin

i liked the flow, i dont think i read part one but im sure it was just as good

thnx fo the feedback
uppin

quit sleepin

yo dawg i was readin ur shit and thinkin it be even tighter if u used triple rhymes to end your bars like when you said
better think twice if you think im "afraid of death"
instead of sayin just last breath put something that rhymes with "afraid of death" ya know what i mean !
it was tight keep it up dawgy!
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