like you said
15-20 bars
3-0 ko first to 5 wins..
no dickrydin, FREEPOSTIN, FEEDIN, OR BITIN'
only poll votes w/explanation...

oh yeh and you spit frist you challanged

sry kinda beat yah to the setting up first part

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same person new tactics, and above all more violent

my doctor says i have anger issues, i told him to watch out i have a gun...

no one spits first both verses due an hour from now...good?

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w/e

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same person new tactics, and above all more violent

my doctor says i have anger issues, i told him to watch out i have a gun...

wats really good
ima vote here when its done but can u holla at
1-n-gone vs jay jay

Cerile 3-0 record?...... man this cant be real./
"hooked", "reeled" in a big "fish" ,broke ya "line"..oops there goes a "real-meal"//


**opener, now im bout to murder you** Real Meal=i saw your prev battles hehehe....


your big mouth reminding me of the toilet I shit on./
"electricity" flow through the cord..... got u"shocked" when I switch the MIc on.//
bitin on my rhyme Book to hold the pain back ..has got u thinkin u hot./
well ..u not.........why read the "book" when i already ruined your "plot".!!!//
A Big "Dog" barks at you..... and this man bunny hops as he "fleas"./
i seen better "joints" on a 90 yeard old witt arthitis in his knees......//
im not hearing your pleads like a deaf "priest" at a "confesional"./
intentional ?.. yeah throwing u out with the garbage is just conventional.//
u cant contain me... and the only "containment" u busted out of was a "test-tube"../
"slipped" when u checked in cause "fags" say u carry the "best-lube".//
im in another level that when u battle u fight alone./
your "handless" and "mute" not meant to "spit-n-grip" a microphone.//
this isnt taught ,,,its like an umbilical cord just something u born with./
u never speak truth,,,even if u had your "hand" on the "bible" and got "sworn-in".//
after i "boil" you.. u might come hard after i "peel your shell"../
im a spoil it for u......we dont feel u.... just cause u feel your-self.//.
insides "spilled" like "take-out"........ cause you wont ever "wrapped-tight."/(rap-tight)
take "flight" sit tight your "plain", "run-way" dont do this out of spite.//
u Dick ryde hard in this "rodeo" ..ima "clown" you and call u "cowboy"./
your depurified lessen to a degree where your not metal you alloy//(look up meaning of alloy)


** stand above and push the sword through**


Tied Two of your fingers Together when u Type..u still couldnt Text Twice as nice../
Profund Paragraphs got u Re-Readin feelin like u got your head in a Vice.//
before u battle me,,,,go ask Colin Powell for advice.......///


THE END

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aight here we go

lines due in an "hour", man fuck you i can rhyme this shit in the "shower"//
you obviously dont know who you "are", you got a hannibal "lec-tar" "avatar"//
in your sig you got "DBZ", damn someone obviously is alittle more confused than Ja on "extacy"//
break your rhymes down causin your manhood to shrivel and go inward bound//
give yo daughter her diapers back foo, stop shitting yourself man your 22//
im kain and your able, so excuse me while i cause pain and becom unstable//
tear you from limb to limb, cant wait to hear you screams when i "snap into" you like a "Slim Jim"//
Your in a losin battle "rule", come back at you so hard im "em" fucking fool//
stop trying to "equivicate", shits so rotten like when you "Deficate", so fucked up its illegal in "every-state"//
ill wait while yo clean your "excrament", thinkin safe like "Parliament"//
"recessed" to prevent "cancer", im "obsessed" like Hitler was with the "Panzer"//
cant stand your own "presence", it shows hell look at your "countenance"//
"igor" has nothing on you, may i "implore", were you "frankenstiens" "experiment"//
or were you a failure of your father "design", maybe just a sex fling of two "adolecents"//
your mom was probably "pregnant" with you when she was 16,
but that jsut an "aproxomate", she was probly fourteen//
like your mother, your daughter will "folla", hmm and i might be ova 18 but ill still "holla"//
and when im done with her im comin for your "tight-fly-wife", and cut both there "tracheas" with a "dull-ass-knife"//
but i shouldnt be making fun of "you", all you are is "spermatorrhea"(pre-ejaculation) "Jew"//
youll never be anything you "failed-abortion", please get your shit straight its all "outa-proportion"//
please do make yourself "gone", like ems uncle "ron"//



done!

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same person new tactics, and above all more violent

my doctor says i have anger issues, i told him to watch out i have a gun...

Good Battle bro,,,,,,let the voting begin

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u 2
uppin for votes

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same person new tactics, and above all more violent

my doctor says i have anger issues, i told him to watch out i have a gun...

i thought both were very good actually.

favorite bribe line:u cant contain me... and the only "containment" u busted out of was a "test-tube"../
"slipped" when u checked in cause "fags" say u carry the "best-lube".//

favorite cerile line:give yo daughter her diapers back foo, stop shitting yourself man your 22//
im kain and your able, so excuse me while i cause pain and becom unstable//
tear you from limb to limb, cant wait to hear you screams when i "snap into" you like a "Slim Jim"//

nice job both but actually ima go with bribe. not cuz hes in my crew but because his punches were a little nicer to me.

you dont have to count this vote cuz im crew....unless you want to

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Go ahead. Turn your back on me. Thats when I punch you in the back of your head. Faggot.

Fuck wit me once, shame on you. Fuck wit me twice, youre dead.

Bribe... some pretty good lines... well let me not say that... you had some lines... that could have been fuckin hot... and I mean FUCKIN HOT... like the plot line... you could have flipped that... not bad... not bad at all... just a few things to learn naw mean..? how to set up punches... like the opener than the break after that..? what was that... NEVER DO THAT... Could have played his name more like...

I killin this kids lucky charms to seem him fell,
this dude is fruity loops... if he don't think I kill cereal...

naw mean..?

work on rhyme scheme also...

Cer


some good lines here and there... could have been more... you should have tried if you didn't... and if you did you should have tried harder... your lines were PLAYED... and you're from Jersey..? That fuckin disappoints me... Snap into you like a slim jim..? My god...




vote: Bribe...



That based solely on potential lines... that neither of you lived up to...

aiight here it is......both were real nice......great puches and delivery and word play.....i read it twice and I'm gonna have to go wit Bribeone....each of his lines were on point......i followed his all the way through.......cerile urs was on point too except for a couple of lines i wasn't feelin'....all in all.....good battle....vote goes to bribeone1

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Blessed wit Skillz

**walks in .....scratches head**

three respectable votes..........no poll votes though ...

uppin,,,

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Bribeone1 that shit is phat you got my vote

Bribeone1 gets my vote hit mine up vs thabest chill

Yo are these polls broken ...4 votes for me ..no poll votes....

4-0 ko,,,ding,ding,ding....but still no poll votes....rrrghhh

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