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Old 04-25-03, 08:14 PM   #1
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Exclamation I Need Yall to judge this shit.......

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yo i went to this niggas site where his the admin to battle him over there and the battle was 5-2 he won tell me what yall think.........


1-killaeffect

you couldn't LOCK ME IN YA BARZ even if you owned the JAIL...
you always BITCH AND COMPLAIN as if you were a FEMALE...
it's like you have ASMA because my lryics are stuck as you INHALE...
you wouldn't be TIGHT if you were a COLLEGE VERGION...
your like a DEMO about 1/8 MY VERSION...
i got you in PAIN but you can't fuck ME UP just cause i got you POPPIN VIKADEN...
if you wanna REMATCH just go back to HELL cause you gonna get BURNED AGAIN...
he couldn't wreck me if he had A BOULDER and i was a BROKEN BUILDIN...
battlin me you OUTTA PLACE like KEN GRIFFEY INFEILDIN...
i aint even HIRE YOU YET but you still call me BOSS...
im RUNNIN ALL OVER YOU so call me RANDY MOSS...
now as ya OPTICALS WATCH you catch THIS LOSS...
cause you GETTIN BURNED like i was a FLAMING HEATA...
you FUCKED UP like my girl hit wit my WIFE BEATA...
think you can HANG but your left ko'd INNA TREE...
imma make you ma SLAVE and bitch you neva gonna be FREE...
call it the MOON WALK because im kickin ya ass in OTTA SPACE...
you a DIRTY SKANK ya bitch even say you gotta GIRLY FACE...
the aftamath is you LIMPIN because you progress inna SLOW PACE...
OIV? I thought it was HIV because ya said you was SICK...
you get disses from CARTOONS cause you stared in the NICK PICK...
in ya moms joor was A DILDO and she said that it was ya only DICK...

ahh thats all i need..............don't No-Show you fuccin pussy............1Luv



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2-oiv

*yawns*

*krackz KNucklez*

it begins............


*fades in*
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*walking down ramp with weapon*
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*swings*
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this fucka is a 'killa'? he gets no respect/
hes like a blind kid at a laser light show....presents no 'effect'/
look at the crew in ya sig... no ones in it.. your just an alone-co founder-owner-soldier/
the way ya lines are recycled like cingular wire minutes... they rollover!/
50 cal. aint wont to be in ya fake crew.. u straight shit/
he only joined cuz he heard u a good dickryder.. that practices words oral-intation.. on spitting when u suck dick/
and u claim u good at text... look at ya sig nigga.. where should i begin/
u had to battle a rookie FEMCEE... just to claim a WIN/(cristal second name in sig)
i like to help the impaired so im the special ed syceatric ward teacher/
blow out ya 'ear' drums, stop ya 'voice'... make u a prime example 'representitive'.. of 'mute speakers'/
put u on 'fire'... and leave u 'hot' to 'deff'/
burn-to-death then blazed ashes swept to urn and kept/( for the LOse of a true Fagcee)
spit bars to hit-desensitize nerves in ya spine, leave u to a chair... confind/
ur like a verbal amputaed leged paripalegice..so couldnt kick a ryhme/
ya sig contains u beat 11 rookies/
ima pimp with vengance that kills kats, so i guess u the next pussy/
us a broke-no talent having 'bum'... that dont stand for nothin/
stuff u full of 'dough' and 'bread yeast' put u in the oven...to make u a real 'raga'-'muffin'/
im a reminder of 'milwalki's ball team', takes 'shots' like wild 'bucks' stand in streets.. and fuck cars up/
bitch u could eat 50 pounds of over 'cooked steak' and ya 'beef' still wouldnt be 'tough-enough'/
-K.E.'s- a handyman that stays cocky cuz he hasent touched pussy before/
u could have sounds of fucking in the back of ya audios.. and ya tracks still wouldnt be hardcore/
this nigga wanted to battle me in a pinkslip match... now why talk about ya mama's coochie/
her legs remind me of a man with no arms.., shirts are always got loosesleves/
got in her fuck'n 'ocean' n 'spray'd (oceanspray drink) it... made it 'ruby-red' soaked/
quenched the bitches thirst, kicked in between her chest and her chin straight into her throat/
come on killa.. dont let my words goto ya head/
cuz ya might think and Over Dose on thoughts that will leave u BRAIN DEAD/


*finisher*....*super spinning back breaker*

to my recolection... u will never beat the best, u couldnt 'pen' 'paper' on the 'pad'... even if u were the ref/
and this shit was just a test..., to let u know ull get fucked up with a virus unless u practice ya verses.. like safe sex/

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vote.........

and tell me cuz im going to another site to....

to see what they say too...

1 or 2....
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Old 04-25-03, 08:17 PM   #2
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I WAS ACTUALLY FEELIN THIS JOINT ,, KEEP FLOWING DAWG , , ,RETURN DA FAVOUR And reply to my drop http://63.219.149.14/forum/showthre...&threadid=41612
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Old 04-25-03, 08:22 PM   #3
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lmfao nah yo u supposed to vote on 1 or 2 who one it im number 2 but i can tell u aint read it lmao....................



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Old 04-25-03, 08:46 PM   #4
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yo uppin this i need yall to hit it up to show this nigga he aint win
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Old 04-25-03, 08:49 PM   #5
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yo reply to my drop and i will tell u who won dis battle , ,,heres da thread to my drop http://63.219.149.14/forum/showthre...&threadid=41612
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Old 04-25-03, 09:28 PM   #6
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you won dat battle in my opinion...
some good shit...
made me laugh...
you sayin he actually beat you...
let me know when you have more battles...
i like the style of your rappin...

return da favour and give HONEST feedback on this piece

http://63.219.149.14/forum/showthre...&threadid=41606

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Old 04-25-03, 09:34 PM   #7
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yeah dawg u definately won this battle , keep up da good work cuzzn
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