felt like droppin a quick keystyle, tell me what u think and I will be sure to return the favor, thx




yo yo checkit/
I lay awake in the night/
I wait...for the fear to subside/
to subside, to ly and fall ASLEEP, but it wont happen tonight/
so tonight...I rhyme and my pen WEEPS as my mic cries/
the pad is a tissue to my eyes/
the fear is only to me and only in these damn lines/
cuz Im afraid of my own damn mind/
a poetic rapper is a misplaced lyricist/
the only one who's feelin this cuz Im truly fearin this/
Ive only spit to one beat yo/
and thats the beat of my heart with the mic of my soul/
sometimes I turn the key but the car wont seem to go/
it hurts and it pains but it mostly frustrates/
cuz the worst thing bout the fear is not bein able to let it out/
so I scream and I cry, and I scream and I shout/
fear is the price of the imagination/
so much fuckin frustration/
intimidation in face'n my own "Hooliganation/
brain's dazed, impatient and in-cased-in pain and-laced-in/
the rain of loathin/
lo-and-be-hold'n my broken mic/
my broken life and now this broken rhyme/
broken down and cryin/
no more hide'n or lie'n/
and tryin with rhymin/
I aint goin nowhere, stuck in a spot, stuck in a rut/
stuck in a slump like Im bustin widout a nut/
fuckin widout a butt or a cunt/
fear continues, shaken with shivers/
never figures to stop/
until a figure to drop/
but thats the price folks/
but thats the price.

uppin

i wasnt really feelin dis ,, ,work on ur vocab , u got da metas , , but u need vocab

u fuckin retards and ur vocab
usually i dont hav a prob with negative critiques
if they make sense
but REAL emcees know vocab doesnt mean shit in
a deep piece
its about puttin ur feelings on a piece of paper
and its about doin' it for u
not for some wack newbie that is just monkey'n
what they read someplace
vocab my fuckin nuts faggot

word...
it only matters if you get the point across doesnt matter what words you use...
this shit reminds me of what i have heard of NAS
good drop

"intimidation in face'n my own "Hooliganation/
brain's dazed, impatient and in-cased-in pain and-laced-in/"

was'nt bad, work on meta's and stuff, was o.k though