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Old 04-24-03, 03:09 PM   #1
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A Battle verse I did

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I usaually don't battle online but this was cats I know from doing ish offline. I recorded in a hurry a little because it was due lololol anyway

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/mcblackflamemusic.htm

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Old 04-24-03, 03:20 PM   #2
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whoa .. u sound grimey az hell on this .. u don't sound proper like all ur other trackz for some reason .. lol .. lol@ur no big deal like signin with indiez .. flow iz good .. and ur delivery iz decent .. lol@shelfed like foxy brown .. this waz funny .. good drop duke
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Old 04-24-03, 06:10 PM   #3
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oxy pads nice drop, good rough feel to it.
-Slim
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Old 04-24-03, 10:12 PM   #4
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<<<mad excited
Dawg I aint heard you spit in AGES!
But Im a lil tired to respond, so maybe I will come and edit
this later with a response.... ill

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Old 04-24-03, 11:02 PM   #5
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lol, this is cool yo. It was hard 2 hear ya voice at times, but it was pretty good man, keep it.
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Old 04-24-03, 11:57 PM   #6
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You sound like a real rapper.. lol
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Old 04-25-03, 12:25 AM   #7
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High Its Your Number One Fan Skeez Nigger Face High But Yeah..The Track...

OMG You Do Sound Like A Real Rapper..Multies Are Nice...Kinda Off Beaaaaaaat A Little..LMAO Oxy Pads Helll Nah..Good Shit...Dog Far Fetched..Ahhh....WTF AT Beat So Annoying And Reptative..LFMDOsanfids At No Big Deal Like Signin Wit Indie's..Good Shit..Try Mixin Up The Rhyme Schemeeeeee A Little..Good Shit Though..YELL MOTHERFUCKER...
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Old 04-25-03, 12:36 AM   #8
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Word the snare is weird like it hits once than twice and I wont pause twice so I just spit through it. I did cue early or late at some spots thanks for listening and leaving some nice feedback.
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Old 04-25-03, 01:21 AM   #9
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nice track nigga, fo real, grimey style..and yea,tha snare was a lil messed....but u did tyte ova it, mos def...propz bro...wun

p.s...are u tha blackflame from ...............????...get at me..peace
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Old 04-25-03, 03:34 AM   #10
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sht jamz like dat beat jus need lil work on it but its still gravy
whiteheads huh
raise vocals a lil

n return da feed
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Old 04-25-03, 04:29 AM   #11
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Word I'ma peep now
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Old 04-25-03, 04:38 AM   #12
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p.s...are u tha blackflame from .................????...get at me..peace


No and I will be checking that site now.
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Old 04-25-03, 01:54 PM   #13
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straight shit dog i aint seen u drop any tracks in a long min neways what else but ill
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Old 04-25-03, 09:41 PM   #14
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Nice... tight track dawg..iLL

I like ya love song to dawg, you got some real spit's...

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Old 04-26-03, 02:29 AM   #15
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nice track man...

i like what you got here bro...i think with your cadence, you could do some damage over a...i dunno, a different type of beat i guess...took me a minute to find your flow but nice nonetheless man...

ill drp
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