I'm, i'm done wit thes thugs...
man, i'm done, done wit these thugs...

[RT]
I was done with my thug life.
Tired of coming home high on those long nights
Tired of cops, reading me my rights
I’m done now, I’m ready to change,
Man, I’ve found the church and jesus Christ, I can now offload my conscience poltergeist
I’m oblivious now to rap thugs like the three blind mice, I did’nt disobey once, it was twice
I regret I ignored all friendly advice, I lived by the sword now I’ll shouda die by the sword
If it was’nt for the almighty lord, I would been dangling from an electrical cord,
With ancient scriptures my faith was restored, my life still felt like a dart board
Niggas, still after me wit mack 10’s, but my faith, hit back by sending them to the pen
My relationship with the man upstairs, was like Barbie and ken, guess this was the reward for my prayers
But nothing prepares you for the end, *bang*, goes the brains, not mine, it’s theirs.

[Fiori]
Wake up at about 5 dawg cos I don't have a choice...
Every morning im awoken to the sound of a coppers voice...
Givin me shit cos I don't have a home...
Trynna sell one of my many stolen phones...
Don't have any money, a job or a place...
havin to take regular trips to public toilets to wash the dirt from my face...
cant go a day without havin to steal...
havin to kill sumbody just to get myself a meal...
if I try to steal from someone and they try to rebel...
then its pretty much takin me one step closer to hell...
people don't wanna help me so they swing and struggle...
but if they just give me the cash then it would be less trouble...
scrounging for money so I can buy sum more crack...
cant get a job no more cos of the amount of times ive been sacked...
for dippin my hand in the till cos its my only way of survival...
I should've attempted to take a look through the bible...
I now pray to God for forgiveness...
To help me through one day in this business...
But fuck it, cos it just aint workin...
And all this prayin and preachin just aint worth it

(hook)x4
Thug life, it takes you in,
spits you out.again and again..

[RT]
I was stupid and immature, that thinking crack, pot and rap was the cure
I was so sure, but now I reminese that, cos my blood is now pure
Like your sweet, sweet ganja, oh, shit, I’m turning back, back into dat racist
Who’s take the piss outta a panda, cos it’s black and white, but lets face it
I never had what was need to make it, in church, I never did take my foot of the clutch
Never believed this god shit as such, but I kept beliving that my life was so precious,
For anyone to touch, aggressions from the crack, had my mind learning serious lessons
I left my AA sessions, went back to the hood, where most of my nigga’s was restin’
Never to be seen again, lying in to dirt just wastin,
I spent my whole life pacin’, now these catz’ll, rub my face in it,
Went back to the benches and let it rip, wit 9 calibre
Fuckin, reverend call me an degenerate, said I was gonna burn in the eternal pit.

(hook)x4
Thug life, it takes you in,
spits you out.again and again..


[Fiori]
What the fuck do I do now, God isn't there...
Still got no job and my pockets are still bare...
These long cold nights, just fuck up my head...
I'd fuck anything nowadays just so I can get a bed...
Im probably ridden with diseases, but it makes my death nearer...
Cos dyin is my only option, cos my vision is no clearer...
No-one has been there to guide me, or pick me up when I fall...
If I need sumthin to eat, my only option is to rob the nearest stall...
Run in oblivious to who is lookin at me or near...
A voice comes whispering behind me in my ear...
Please don't do this, my daughters got severe sickness...
Fuck it I think shoot her and every eyewitness...
Take all the money, some food and a piece...
Cos its never easy livin today on these streets...
I took many lives and for what, a measly few pound...
A little girl was killed, despite her screamin sound...
Look what I am, If only God can judge me now...
U turned your back when I needed u most, why and how?
Look what you've turned me into, this is your fault not mine...
So fuck you now dawg, for me it's nearly the end of time...
My life is worth nothing now, why am I still hear...
I've been given no other option now, God gave me the all clear...
This gun came in handy, and its for my own health
So fuck God and everyone, I'm now off to hell...(gunshot)

yeah that was hot man
deep man
go check out somethin similar
umm Stressin

thanx dawg........
uppin for more feedback peeps...........

this was...well...let me explain

flow vocab and all of that ran
through nicely. good job for
that... i was not feeling the
content...all this thug shit....
i mean...rythmic your from
ireland...c'mon man..now you
both asked me to peep this
so i did...my only advice...is when
you write...mean it

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man fuck him rythmic................
uppin for more feedback..............

yo, don't be dissing Sand man! hes cool!, i'm just tryin to brach out dawg, maybe i'll drop a piece bout terriost shit, you know, cos we got alot of it over here! lol

hot......deep...................This was tight........8.5/10