rulez:
no d/r
no crew votes
no hate votes
no biting
no recycling
15-20 barz min/max
u spit 1st

yo im @ skool right now so ill hit dis mutha lata!

aiight, I'm checkin in. I'll spit in a couple hours, I need to eat and wake up first.
All votes must be explained to be counted

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Life isn't a bitch...
she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

aiight, here we go

you'll have the same "beat" as logikal, these rhymes leave you ill,
like you guys are 2pac and Cash Money, but lacking their skills/
I'm "mystical", I make you "stutter", whats that you're trying to say?
I bust my glock on your skull, you don’t survive the "gun play"/
These rhymes are the cement on your feet, you sleep with fishes in ponds,
You still won’t see Pussy Galore if you’re the next James Bond/
I make you scream “Uncle!” like a family reunion rapist,
If you were shopliftin from a rhyme store, you still couldn’t take this/
like humpty dumpty diarrhea, your rhymes are soundin so shitty,
mine aren't so sim-pull(simple),while you're jerkin off to Sim City/
these syllables are Notorious, bringin some "bee to your eye" g,(B.I.G)
"stingin your retina", like Stevie, I'm the Wonder you can't see/
you're a 70's pothead, I make you dazed and confused,
I swear I'm droppin bananas, cuz I leave this fruit bruised/
I igniting your words, charring you with 3rd degree burns,
this 10 year old in the 50's, getting strapped till he learns/
like Amelia Earhart, I aerially fly your verse into an abyss,
If I was a 6 string guitar, there's still no way you coulda "play"ed this/

lets see if this is enough
One Love

__________________
Life isn't a bitch...
she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

real hot verse dawg...hol on imma post ma shit now!

yo il hit dis 2mmorow i gotta bounce

wheres your verse?

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Life isn't a bitch...
she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

attemptin 2 spit sick punchlinez, u couldnt b ill if u were diagnosed wit aids//
u rappin iz mo fucked up den white kids wit braids//
i knok dis mans linez like a stray bullet frum a nine//
uz pathetic spitin Nikilodean shit and bittin Aaron Carters rhymez//
u light weight untrained nigga trying to bang swords with a samurai/
a jedi, make niggas resemble biggie when I give U "a dead eye"//
homez is feminine like a long walk through a spring meadow full of dandelions//
u gonna need a team of crack ciropractors to examin ya spine//
afta dis battle i would love 2 rewind time and savour each moment of ya demise//
dont take dis shit seriouse homez whip ya eyez//
but doin dat would only put me through da event of fuckin ya momz and bein dere when u were born//
herez sum advice do sumethin profatible like play "tug of war" wit yaself while watchin ya kiddie porn//
ya name witout looser iz like Michael Jackson witout facelifts//
dis man couldnt throw hard punchlinz if he had cement blocks stitched 2 his fist//

ova....shit but wateva!

aiight, nice verse, uppin for votes

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Life isn't a bitch...
she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

yo, maybe we should move this shit to the regular front lines, nobody votes here....

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Life isn't a bitch...
she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

yo, i'm reposting this shit in Front Lines where we can get some votes.
repost the same verse.
Peace
-close this!-

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Life isn't a bitch...
she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

moved to front lines. your welcome.

thanks dig....just delete my repost of this

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Life isn't a bitch...
she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

uppin for votes
stop sleepin!

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Life isn't a bitch...
she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

yo this was a hot battle yall
nice verses from both emcees seriously
mad punches in them both and they hit hard too
ima have to go wit play tho cuz his shit was just harder you know
his lines seemed to stick wit me more

my vote play

holla at my battle http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=42855

attemptin 2 spit sick punchlinez, u couldnt b ill if u were diagnosed wit aids//
u rappin iz mo fucked up den white kids wit braids//

that stole ths show, both were great raps, but that took it

vote=play