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04-20-03, 11:28 PM
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Killah
IP: 6236 079F
This is just alil something.
I was listenin to Sean Paul-Get Busy and I got alil hype. So, I opened up Word Pad and started typin this shiz. Peep and rate. It ain't much but still. -I'm spittin incision with precision that'll cause physicians to produce prescriptions without jurisdiction...Lyrically contendin with emcees who ain't hip, Got their dome split, Written scripts posted in brain fragments, Keepin spectators lit...Tongue spits perfect to precisely dismantle, Grabbin on ya girl's love handles, Got her ridin it manual...Wrecklessly releasin metallical rhymes with mechanical sublime, Combust ya spine, Even my lyrical text is grime...Drop concrete schemes continuously spat, Get clapped in ya arm, Leg unmapped from where ya frame's drawn. |
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04-29-03, 11:51 AM
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Venomous Beast
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IP: 4577 CD9A
dazamn
this has been slept on like a mug up" |
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04-29-03, 11:55 AM
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IP: 36E2 1765
Very good ... a little short but you did say " just a quick one" and when you make a longer one be sure to pm me
 ~peace |
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04-29-03, 12:58 PM
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IP: 1678 1F96
i honestly wasnt feeling it..u rhymed the same syllables too much and the topic sucked u had good flow but that was it
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