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Old 04-30-03, 05:14 AM   #1
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Cannibalistic

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i didnt know what else to call it well tell me whatcha think
i wrote this at school today took like 15 mins and very little has been eidited


I’m that cannibalistic being that couldn’t be classified by scientists,
Got mo rhymes in my tapes then black n Decker kitchen appliances,
When I drop a verse the effects of it are off the Richter scale limit,
Go to area 51 look at the wall of unidentified fighting emcees n I be in-it,
I got mo power then 2 thousand horses galloping,
Mo power then a stealth bomber traveling,
Ova the area of where we was mean to be battling,
N my verse is like the bomb that should-a been dropped-off,
Nothing from my mouth has ever dropped-soft,
I show emcees often, on a regular basis what happens when yo rhymes soften,
I’m hotter then the summer temperature in Libya,
Harsher then the landscape n rugged mountain terrain that remain in Syria,
My rhyme quality superior,
N just like Juice said “you got a question mark I’m the nigga here period”,
Now let me get mo serious like George bush as on the war against terrorism,
I take the cross off yo chest n stab ya in yo heart cuse that’s my form of exorcism,
I’m like a terrible illness n nun a yaw emcees can be saved by medicine,
Not even if they brought back Thomas Edison,
And you know the darkness has risen as seen through your eyes when I was projecting my vision,
If u up against me then be ready to get masacared like the Gallipoli army mission,
its bure heroic but dangerously suicidal, murda any emcee if opposed towards me as a rival,
And I leave you no chance of survival,
N my existence is a mystery like Aries Rock in the southern Hemisphere,
Was I a natural cause or an asteroid launched by aliens either way the truth to be found is far from near,
Leavin emcees blood splattered so you gotta wipe the blood off yo pupils to see this clear..............

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Old 04-30-03, 05:40 AM   #2
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come on peeps dont sleep on this
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Old 04-30-03, 02:51 PM   #3
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People need to wake up on everyone post before I let loose lol... Nice peice... I liked it you started the begining out with POW! lol.. OoNnEe always elevating!!
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Old 05-01-03, 07:09 AM   #4
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yo thanks angelicsheshe fo the comments, i'm a reply to yo shit when eva i see.......

uppin fo replies
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Old 05-02-03, 09:24 AM   #5
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wake up cunts and stop sleepin on my shit
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Old 05-02-03, 09:33 AM   #6
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i dont know why people sleepin on this...its was tight..im totally feelin your style dunny...doo you do any audios and shit...anyways imma always read your shit its the kinda verbals i like reading...wahid
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Old 05-02-03, 09:36 AM   #7
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You came on strong but finished weak, Kinda like the wolves not endin the lakers streak...j/k...Very good rhymes, jus try and use less fillers at the end it seemed like you were rushing..but good drop. Nice vocab.
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