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Old 04-16-03, 02:58 PM   #1
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lemme draw u a picture, i'll draw it with a twist
i'll draw it with a razorblade, i'll draw it on ur wrist
i'll draw it on some canvas so u get my gist
i'll draw it all over ur face with my clenched fist
lemme draw u a picture all over u so taht u bleed
a lil shot of adrenaline is all i need
let me draw u determination that i got with all my pain
lemme draw u a picture so that u see what i maintain
gimme a paintbrush or a knife or a pen
i'll draw u a picture of all my sin
i dont think u understand or see the reason for my art
i dont think u see this thing the way i've seen it from the start
if i draw my picture right a red fountain will appear
it might bring u pain but it will take away my fear
take away the fear thats held me back for so long
u think i'm unconventional but my picture says ur wrong
my picture says i'll never die, it'll keep me alive forever
my picture says u'll never forget me, yeh u heard me, never
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Old 05-18-03, 06:25 PM   #2
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This was an...interesting one. Definately pretty graphic and it made me feel...afraid of you, lol :P I guess you like art or something. I'm not really sure. And I'm wondering if you cut yourself?

Of course, I wouldn't be suprised if I completely missed the point of this writing cause I usually do.

"i dont think u understand or see the reason for my art
i dont think u see this thing the way i've seen it from the start"

I liked those lines. I usually can't see something in the finished stage when it's just getting started but I admire people who can. Overall this was a pretty good piece.
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