VENOM

like the snake wit venom under its skin/
you had me wrapped in what you plundered within
under the dim
quiet, low lights, you had to stumble to sin/
a couple of hints was the look in ya eye/
shouldn't have I tried to look deep inside/
to find the gas that you put in a fire/
to blow somethin up - in my case,
a truthful desire to be hooked by ya side/
tho it took me a while for my curious side/
to question your acts, I couldn't deny/
the love that i felt, but then the truth opened wide/
i wasn't the queen of fidelity/
i admit i'd creep and cheat the penalty/
but you can't deny the warmth you felt wit me/
promises you held to me you'd go through hell wit me/
but scheming as your specialty, you prevailed easy/
help me with my problems was what you were tellin me/
sayin you'd pick up the pieces that fell quickly/
and your lies taught me to not seek in jealousy/
but to keep the gold and sell the cheap/
now i know not to trust or i will get burned/
won't still return, got my lesson learned/
now sweet revenge is my real concern/
i'd love to introduce you to a rifle/
but far as i know, trash should be recycled/
our time is over, now i'm high and you lower/
cuz while you cry when you older, i'll be dyin a soldier/
when friends told me not to, i trusted you/
i'd front the clues, just because i wanted you/
if i didn't know what to do, i kept thrustin through/
fuck you -
now i know that was my biggest mistake/
wonderin if your words were real or fake/
i'll feel the embrace once you get bitch-hit in the face/
just hope u know this shit will come back to you/
i know you was schemin, so i'm not askin you/
in fact, i'm through/
the lyin, cheatin, facts will do/
just wait, the wave of infidelity'll come crashing through/
then soon the painful venom will start attacking you.//

good , but could have been better

i second that

that was some good stuff for a cuz new to rb, wordplay is ok, flow is pretty good. keep the rhymes flowin....