Ok Avalon
rules:
12lines max
5-0 is KO
if not poll votes will decide
No crew/No D.ryders/No Bullshit/No Hate

ok..check in when ready to begin

Oyea and before you check in...can you go vote on my other battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=42879

checked... I'll be back later...

by the way... poll votes are gonna decide it anyway...

Ok, shall we begin

I disperse-to-hit this-fool, Av couldnt get hands up, in a PullPit::
this dudes, whole verse-is-against-the-rules,read carfully it says NO BULLSHIT::

Your small "calfs", cant run with this big "Beef",even if you raised Cows::
Dislexics telling there "MOM" to look at your verse, wouldnt even say "WOW"::

I knock Av into the words over his avator, to send him back into retirement::
burn your entire-fist, yet you still would not have any fire-prints::

Hes a biter,why-wait? Av should copy and print-this-message-the-same::
becuase Av couldnt say "IM great", if "Great" was his instant-message-name::


Bet Av is thinking by now, "this is no regular Newbie"..lol....Its not over yet

You couldnt "wave your dick ryders down" to vote for you here, if you surfed-dick::
Av your a "Nobody", guess its NOT TRUE that "Nobody" is Per-Fect::

You must want to die "the hard way", becuase in this battle "Av-your-Fucked"::
my lines "Strict & land" like "ROD", you wouldnt have a "Hot ROD" with a classic truck::


None of your overrated tricks will get you out of this one Av..thanks for the nice welcome to RB...1

oh shit rise...you drop some real nice shit....

feelin' the verse.. I will vote on this when both rhymes is up, so go vote on my ish.. (Both verses are posted)

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up for AV

Thought this battle'll be epic... figured ya verse'd be chocked o quotes
instead I see a 12 line piece wit 4 punches... and 3 I WROTE...
How's this for Latin descent..? This nigga is Boot-ay
He's Mr Take-My-Favorite-Rappers-Line-And-Disguise-It-In-A-Cute-Way...
notice that name... shame is somethin funny but nothin great guys
just... whats up with that E? I thought bitch finished with H Ris'E'...
computer loser... Av'll hack ya shit, fuck it up and start shooting
watched his life flash before his eyes... then Rise started rebooting...
Face in a cell... molecularly you still couldn't handle Av well kid
you'd think we'd be friends the way I hit this kid with blunts and L's...THIS BIG..!
Rise is scarin me kids... dislexic 'MOM' is 'MOM' whore
and Rise reversed... is Me... cummin in Yours...




COT DAMN..!



Avalon...

lol....so you made it
and Mom upside down is Wow..av
I didnt mean backwards, but I shouldnt have to explain that to real emcees

Up for votes...NO D RYDING

i vote avalon....harder punches....

Dam this Newbie just served you Avalon

punches:Rise
Metas:Rise
multis:Rise
technique:Av
wordplay:Rise

vote=Rise

yo if you win this sh*t Av...then its obvious you got D Rydas, because you just got your ass handed to you...lol

still nice battle though to both

I vote that nigga avalon cuz he the rookie nigga don't hit hard enough.

This is tough because I want to say I like Av's spit better, but like I've said before I just don't feel Rise's style that much. Im' not gonna do a hater vote, anyway I've got no hate for Rise, so I'm gonna say tie.

and remember Rise, we gotta have a rematch....

Fa show Dub..I respect that

Rise you said dislexic... most dislexic people see things backwords... not upside down... but I shouldn't have to educate you...