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:::Ears ringing, rumors lingering, saying
BaKCardii's a bastard, born to faces
switched with satan, seeing things cause
I'm plastered~~~
mixed with-in, the blood with-sin, adrenaline
seepin through skin, my brains blown
to the fact that the devils me friend~~~
catastrophies on my thoughts when they rain
in my head, and you think you see tears?, nah
that's the rage that I shed~~~
I cant absorb to the fact I'm chewed and swallowed
by fright, my visions blurred to the signs
voices louder at night~~~

:::An Elm street inside my mind
but no freddy's not here, a
temporary storage organ for
my feelings an fears~~~
things propelled from my lips
would leave you silent like lambs
giving me another reason to get a
mental exam~~~
dont get it wrong I'm not crazy i just look at shyt different
fuck the world and what it's worth cause mine is torn and demented~~~
seen stampeding in the darkness, trying to get out quick
before my mind freezes time and invites me on trips~~~
but no one can hear me scream not even the 13th ghost
saying I'm a lost cause and uh, welcome to the colt~~~


:::But see my souls gone and
my brain is distorted must have
been that shot of guilt and that
anger I snorted~~~
cant understand that when i think
my thoughts is nearly contagious
and when I speak many people
cackle Jesus just save her~~~
used to wish of slit-wrists and mis-fits
in dark spaces, now I wish of pure's kiss
in dim lights with mime faces~~~
but like it says it's just a wish and me, I'm
gutter grown, but when I wake up from
the daze, dont matter my brainz blown~~~
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uh I out a lot of emotion into this one so read it
and do whatcha do'
*~Holler~*

This was ill
feelin ya style mami..
no doubt

peace
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this wuz a ill drop homie.I could tell u put sum real feelin in2 it,jus let ya emotions takeova.Thats wut made it good,u kno.Stay ^
-Avi

tight ass drop dawg , i was feelin it

hey ma , very deep post

thanx to all who replied....
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uppin

Very tight rhyme , i like yo style

thnx uppin
dyum ya'lldont sleep
it's not go jump off the page and bite ya!!!

What's up ma? Nice post, the wordplay was ill as hell... you stay on top of yo shit. Always got the nice rhymes... uppin' this joint.

as expected nena me encanta