10 lines max
3-0 ko 5 wins
no crew d/r or hater votes
you spit first
got 30 minutes kid

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=42514e i'll vote on this but vote on mine right quick if its cool

iight dog here it is

check it

im picturin toothless bitches and raggedy ass virgins in ya hometown//1
lil smoke me from the not to familiar area in virgin ya think ya got what it takes to be grown now//2
im bout to tear ya another ass hole and destroy the phony views that make you think you a man//3
murda ya plan like stealth and drop atomic attacks like you think you in japan//4
kinkin ya life span to another 30 seconds, my verse'll be over//5
wait til you older and til your able to be sober cuz you must be drunk acceptin this battle, im like nas you hova//6 (no contest)
but maybe wit a little luck from a clover you could keep a cold shoulder and pretend like im not there//7
but you just scared to realize that im here in ya face and wont back down til i get a return stare//8
the sad part is, i posted up as a novice on the board you a light weight, lets see how it goes//9
when the votes roll in ya verse will be no showin and thats a ko and boot from the board, but i still got the win to show//10

holla that was like 10 lines in 10 mins dog!!!!

ok ya shit could be bettah if ya took ya dads dick out ya ass /
idiotioc mutha fuck could've been smart if you rolled weed not grass /
i m not racist but i'll smother you with nazi cyanideable gas /
when im done with ya mother imma slit her throught with anthrax on broken glass /
cause im just that fucking crazy , but hate non-verbal inalectuals /
i saw you eaten the professah's undies ,but i hate to tell tou they wont edables /
when ya try ta stop me ya bettah come a lil more metaphorical /
when yer write my fuckin name bitch learn ta be respectfull /
ya bored me with ya verse , it was more lectureable /
imma get of so ya mom can give me some pleasureables /

lmfao holla

uppin if you vote here i vote there

uppin again paople

im bout to vote here but first vote in the poll of mine. u jus gave a reason

ok you give reason 2 ok

lilsmokey got this won. better wordplay in my opinion. d verbal was just messy with his.

1-0 uppin

still 1-0 me uppin holla

^obvious DR vote...

Real vote should go to D Verbal...he threw better wordplay
even tho his barz were uneven...punches were *ehh* but
it was overall a better verse than LilSmokey's...

OnE

hater 1-1 uppin

still 1-1 uppin