This is just a start, but there is this real faggot ass kid in my school and i had enough of em...
~~Just some info~~~
-he has a real high voice
-shaves his legs for cycling
-is a goth wanabe
-Teachers pet



Ya I know a faggot....... I'll wreck this kid quickly
Nate Cambell........ who sucks mens dicks swiftly
Strictly....... shaves his legs to ride and pedal
This boy should win an ass-kissin medal
Tries to be way to funny.... puts us all in confusion
But his voice is too high cause he suffers from anal intrusion
My Rhymes are brusing, my beats are sicker than AIDS
This fuckin faggot is wacker than a red head-cracker with braids
Man you fell of ur bike... what the hell happened?
Get your mind off of dreamin bout manhole fudge packin


~~~ Just a start, if u have any changes u think would make it sound better, or have anything u think i could add to make it better, let me now~~~

hahahahaha....damn dawg u must really hate dat kid....had me laughin my muthafuckin ass off playa, nice drop yo,... much love......hahahah

return tha fava read my drop Dear God a letta fo forgiveness and hit me back its gettin slept on thx, peace

thanks man

I like the ass kissin medal..I know a couple of those lol.. OoNnEe

thanks~~~ keep replyin peeps

Yo ishh was wack to me but hey! I'm pretty sure it would
rip dude. But when it comes to real Hip Hop peeps in the crowd
would laugh at you and throw tomatoes at ya... But yo with
some mad delivery i guess you cant go wrong. If i were you i'd
do alot of body language and good delivery fa show!!

id have ta say that sucked

dont just say it sucked, tell me whats wrong with it so i can make changes

keep replyin

:::blah:::......you hate this guy i see, beat the shit outta him boy, dont tell us bout em

lol, thanks... last time i didnt describe the kid, everyone was like that was gay... so i just gave details, w/e man, ima ask otic bout ur crew.......

keep replyin

this one is about someone in my school.......

his name is ian parkes//
his hair sticks up like he just been fightin with sparks//
his voice is very low//
his nickname is parkie homo//
he got no mates//
he even gets jumped at the school gates//
hes so black we even call him burnt cukie//
his defenition word for a blowjob is suckie//
he 14 and never necked anyone//
a neck is a french kiss, its what we call it where i come from//
he so gay and retarted//
when we doin gym hes the one who farted//
he just one of those people who are so fuckin annoyin//
someone cut his head with a coin//
he aint got a girlfriend, so he still a freshman//
his whole life is a mess man//
today he come to school with a reef//
he so thick he smiles with yellow teeth//
he trys to be one of the boyz//
but he even playz with action men toyz//
comes to school with out of date clothes on his back//
someone burnt his bike on the bike rack//
it might sound a bit sly//
but if you saw him you would cry...............WITH LAUGHTER