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Old 04-11-03, 01:02 PM   #1
DaviD WoRdplay
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Exclamation The Truth

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The Truth

The-truth-resides within my open mic and between-the-lines
Just read-the-signs to witness God and the-beast-collide
Havoc reached-your-mind, no need for eyes when amongst-the-blind
Trust-in-time, the sun will corrode and no-longer-shine
a-stronger-spine hasn’t witnessed the flurry of rage-like-mine
build-the-shrines, God can’t even fuck with us, I’m-past-devine
fuck-this-swine, cuz I have more skin pigment I’m the first-to-be-searched
It’s-worse-to-be-hurt by words so who’s gonna be the first-to-be-merked
Cursed-but-it-worked, word warrior with rhymes reassuring these twerps-get-it-worse
First-to-disperse, seems like you’re afraid of darkness, yeah it’s worse-in-a-hearse
You feel-I’m-nice, most talk after losing so I guess I must kill-‘em-twice
Slice-and-dice, another death devoted to the god as a sacrifice
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Old 04-11-03, 01:06 PM   #2
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tight nit twin wen weee collaben
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Old 04-11-03, 01:28 PM   #3
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yo, shit was pretty good man, I was definitely feeling ya flow... had some pretty good worplay too...
I ain't really about much, but you showing some nice skill here...
peace
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Old 04-11-03, 02:59 PM   #4
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nice.. you got some sick skill there..

"Havoc reached-your-mind, no need for eyes when amongst-the-blind
Trust-in-time, the sun will corrode and no-longer-shine"....

nice multis an' shit throught the rhyme, vocab was pretty up too....
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Old 04-11-03, 04:00 PM   #5
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thanks for the feedback....

Word Perfect... we gonna collab.. I'm bout to PM you..
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Old 04-11-03, 05:45 PM   #6
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Yo tight shit dawg Keep that good shit flowing

yo PM me when youve done that collabo, that shits gonna be tight
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Old 04-21-03, 11:18 AM   #7
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thanks for the responses... and everyone get at me for a collab
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Old 05-08-03, 04:10 PM   #8
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IM SORRY BUT FOR SOME REASON I DIDNT LIKE THIS.ITS NOT BETTER THAN A SOLDIER'S THOUGHT OR SAY HI 2 THE KO KID.
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