Iigh...check it

Take a moment ta blurt out all yo confessions//
cas wen i spit this...those keepsakes'll turn inta yo agressions//
Consider me bein a blessing, this is my 1st act of affection//

The world now...it's like i'm swimmin in an ocean full of lies//
The waves too strong for ya or do you not hear tha "honest ppl's" cries?//
Thought you went to listen ta 'Jedi Mind'...but you aint do nothin of that kind//
That's how it is...People be sayin one thing n doin anotha//
but that aint gon go on no mo', i'm closin tha shutta//
I've had enuff of answers like "it wuzn't me" or "who told u dat?"//
You kno very well 'what' told me...the world...//
...how every conversation we have today is untruthful chat//

I kno some of y'all may be thinkin i'm exaggeration//
Maybe, I am...but so what...hopefully i'll keep ya peeps imaginin//
A world where there is no honest, truthful or meaningful confessions//
There is no questions...just a lie ta 'fill-in' fo that particular lesson//

Eventually, that's what this world'll turn into n become//
Think about it...That's change yo mind on this matter, some//

Iight..some feedback plz.
Hit mine ^ n i'll get u back

Tight , , , but should have been longer

IIgh...Thanks..^^ Already replied ta urs: Bash

Lookin fa more..

uppin..C'mon peeps more feedback

tight dawg, all very true, maybe coulda expanded da lentgh but overall nice feelin drop..

word this was nice man im liking it

what you say is true and you portrayed what u wanted to say nicely

flow was nice it was abit short but still nice

thanks for peepin mine bro stay up and maybe a collab from me n u shud be in order

pz

Thanks peeps..oh n nh, hit me ^ on aim about that collabo...StreetLegend 02

yo0o im returning the favor lol// ur shyt was tight but like they said the longer it is the more feelin u can put into it..

Thanks mayn...

More feedback plz...

yo0o street cheeak my new shyt out its called crazy return da favor

this was a coo drope . it was real discriptive but like first dude said could have been longer.

street return the favor

tight drop, the flow was steady and the wordplay was good

ITS YA BOY SOPRANO I FELT DAT, YOU WROTE THAT LIKE IT CAME FROM DA HEART. YOU CAN GO READ MINE AND TELL M ABOUT IT.
HOLLA