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Old 05-05-03, 10:50 AM   #1
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Meaning Of Life

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This papermate is my escape from falling in life's trap-door
From being another White Figure drawn on life's Blackboard
Its my chosen tool,
that i work with and live by.
may be a Black Sheep,
but you cant pull the Wool over my eyes.
Asked "do i have a Face for Talent?",
the answer is Yes,
i posess a Nose for Buisness and a Taste for Success!
you can Re-trace my Steps,
but you'd never Walk in my Shoes,
Were all in it to win it,
but if thats true, why does somebody lose?
Im confused.
Needed answers, turned to the man upstairs
but he didnt answer, musta been with others up there.
So it was on me,
to search inside myself and find a result
to find the answer to the one question that everybody wants:
What is the Meaning of Life?
To live, then die when ancient?
or to praise a symbol of power then have your body re-incarnated?
Suddenly an angel touched me,
her skin was silky white.
She showed me the light,
kissed me, and everything felt right
Now id discovered the thing many people had struggled to find
when i look in her eyes,
Sam defines my Meaning of Life.
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Old 05-05-03, 12:04 PM   #2
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STRUCTURE WAS PHENOMINOL SOME CATZ WONT UNDERSTANDTHIS CAUSE OF YOUR MINDS DEPTH YET I FELT THE WORDS AS I READ THAT TELLS ME YOU ARE NO STRANGER TO THIS AND HAVE A GREAT TALENT YOU ALMOST USE STANZA IN RHYME I LIKE THAT I'LL BE WATCHING YOU
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Old 05-05-03, 03:32 PM   #3
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word this was nice. i liked the flow and you had played on words pretty good. nice.
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Old 05-08-03, 04:28 PM   #4
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Bob Afett.
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Old 05-08-03, 05:01 PM   #5
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fo' sure... yurr lyrics are tight and the flow was right on... keep on writin...

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i just gotta say this fo'trill that pic with Ron is fucking hilarious!
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Old 05-08-03, 05:06 PM   #6
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Definitly can feel the depth on this piece....Flow was nice and absolete....but the major factor is the depth an the words that were used....very nice
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Old 05-08-03, 05:09 PM   #7
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nice.. it had an eminem bar structure.. mad quik lines draw'n together to be a masterpiece.. I like your style dawg.. keep 'em comin' like this.. pce
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Old 05-08-03, 05:14 PM   #8
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Dope drop yo
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Old 05-08-03, 05:28 PM   #9
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will you vote for me as an RB Legend piece?
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