yo
10-20 lines 1line=1 bar
no d/r votes no hate votes
no crew votes
try n post b4 u go offline tonight
no feedin provide for ur self thanx

check in b4 i spit so i can drop my verse whenever knowin that u will uh return.............................thanx

Checking in ...

Yo yo yo...
yo what the fuck is you spraying
i cant barely understand what the fuck u sayin
you didnt wanna belive i was good
well now im stepping up to plate like i shood
shut the fuck up, juss close yo lips
this aint some fucking walt disney trip
i own you bitch your fucking mine
i own your mind
i saw you and ya daddy fucking from behind
im live and hott
straight from Stamford CT
fuck wit other fags dont fuck with me
ill chop u up nigga
and barry you in the sea
you aint never herd of deez
your like a mouse wit out the cheese
you aint fucking nuin with out me
you just trash and ill treat you like it
if u wanna fuck wit this
then i hope you can fight it
cos im coming for ya and ill murder you too
Aint nobody round here fucking scared of yoo!

.........and it goes a lil somethin' like diiiiiiis..................





hey mista mista! dont mean ta dis ya/
jus seems dat last night i pissed on ya sista!//
but not b4 i fist her, but right after ya tried to kiss her/
thats u mista, jus a incestuous orphan wisha//

dats right after this battle ya parents will dissown ur name/
doesnt matter much cuz tha shit was lame.now whos to blame?//

its all tha same newbies battle and end up mamed/
my text rhymes split u in peices like broken candy kanes//

this lousy rapper couldnt post up a decent flo he stood still peein/
cuz wat im seein, is gary colemone attemping mc'n'//

that should be illegal, like lustin after kin, but mista grins/
his game is little, like tha movie career of tha olsen twins!//

this battle started finished, like frozen dinners u see tha winner?/
'gone' jus fucked up ya whole life, like foolish victims of roulette spinners!//

u lost it all in one bet playa//

VOTE = 1-N-GONE

Not too much of a battle herre...no contest at all

REASON: Jmista's linez were much too short...he needs ta even them out. 1-N-Gone's shit wuz decent...definitely enuff ta come out on top in this battle

Return tha favor nd vote on my battle wit Punk'D:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=44568

Jmista your lines were way to short and simple. 1-N-Gone had a tighter verse and better punches.

Poll Vote - 1-N-Gone

yo thanks fer imput....

but dont think that one lost is gunna make mestup
shit ill be back

-wun-

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Not really a challenge her

1-N-Gone.....very simple....yet very effective........Told you that shit worked......

the other dude was extremely basic

vote=1-n-gone


Idont no whybut irt says my explanation dont work

lol yaaaaaaa rise .................................................. ............its all thanx to YOU playa(sarcasm)

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LOL a WHOLE lot

mod..........................................this is a k-0............................can we close this up please??????