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aight here i go.........

if i had to change my name ill change it to suicide cuz my ryhmes is suicidal/
you aint no rapper ur a singer from american idol/
talk shit and you'll get sprayed,im like playstation three ive never been played/
i spit acid rain to burn the skin right off ur dome/
now ur name just went from franchise21 to MR.FUNNY BONE/
u just mad cause ur dick is as skinny as a noodle/
ur ryhmes is playschool like a magna doodle/
my ryhmes is so sick i should live inside the hospital/
niggas like u recite my shit like it came out the gospels/
i won this battle cause i got all of rapbattles clappin/
ur career is offically now over,so stop rappin/

are u gonna spit or what im waitin......aight one............................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ......................

A yo u talkin bout im a singer in american idol//
nigga ima wup ya ass cause you know how i do//
Im like tyson ill knock u out wit one blow//
you like going to jail just ta drop da soap, n at night get poked//
Matta fact u deader dan then somebody wit aids, ima play u like spades hang ya ass like dreads or braids//
U don't want it, cause if you did den ya ass be a fool, ima hit u so hard u bout to log of rapbattles//
Yo wat type of name is mysterious, my lines hittin u so hard u gettin delirious//
Lookin like 50 cent before he hit da weightroom, ima merk u and ya whole crew, cause u know how i do, dont get mad cause a dominican just merked u//

BOTH VERSES WERE VERY WEAK....ONE RHYME LINES..SOFT PUNCHES NO WORD PLAY MULTIS NADA....BUT I HAVE TO GIVE THIS TO MYSTEROUS DUE TO THA FACK HE HAD AT LEAST ONE FUCKIN PUNCH.....

well thanx on that but can u poll vote cause that would make it alot better ok so good look........aight one ..............holla back at ur boy

neither verse was too strong but Mysterious took it with a couple of punches. the other cat didn't even spit one decent punch ..............

VOTE-MYSTERIOUS

return the favor and check out my battle with Punk'D (and remember to poll vote)

yo my bad i dont have enough posts to poll vote if i did i would but can u do me the favor to poll vote mine...thanx......aight one holla back

Vote= Mysterious...because he had much better punches, a good flow, and his structure was much better..., franchise you need to work on your punches a lil....

hey return the favor and vote on my battle with Carson jet
heres the link:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=44847

aight thanx buts thats three votes and only one poll vote so can ya do me the favor of pollin aight thanx......aight one holla back

ayo i did poll mines vote in....its prolly other votez...ayo return the favor on my battle....

peace out....
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killa

aight good look on that, and come on peepz im still uppin 4 votes ......dont forget to poll...aight one holla back

lol, this was a aight battle, but i think mysterious took it cause he had harder punchlines and franchise verses wasnt all dat great, they were 2 short

aight good look, but can u poll that would be whole lot better....aight than one .......holla back uppin 4 more votes

aight still uppin for them votes .......and dont forget to poll vote...so far im up1-0........aight one holla back