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Old 05-08-03, 06:41 PM   #1
Evil_SoLo
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Im just a little youngster 14 years old//
A lot of people say he is a joke/
maybe its cuz I dont drink or maybe its cuz I dont smoke/
I dont care ill hold my own/
let my flows grow slow cuz cant take a chance of gettin a choke/
so I dont really care if people dont like what I write cuz they just dont know/
Everyday I learn sumtin new/
and then the next day I notice that my game has improved/
I think bout gettin into a battle first cuz I dont wanna lose/
People think im scared but hey I got nothing to prove/
I write these damn lyrics as if I were thuggish/
but before I hit the "SUBMIT HERE" button I make sure that they are ready to be published/
Maybe they arent the best but its the best I could do/
So back off punk dont make fun, cuz best beleive this kid can talk a lot of shit, aint nothin keepin him from spittin these veses outta his lip/
I got a team but with out them i will hold my own/
me and my team are 1 but as myself I can still speak at a loud tone/
So next time you wanna say that my rhymes need to elevate, understand im just a little rookie but I can take it as a man ill take the blame//
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Old 05-08-03, 06:42 PM   #2
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SPIT, SPIT ^^^^^
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Old 05-08-03, 08:44 PM   #3
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IT WAS OK.IM FEELING YOU.YOU ARE TRYING TO LET PEOPLE KNOW WHAT YOUNG RAPPERS AS YOUR SELF IS ALL ABOUT.
KEEP ELEVATING.!!
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Old 05-08-03, 09:14 PM   #4
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elevate ur vocab , wordplay , multies , metaphorz , and u will get better
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