ok rules.....

10-20 lines
no d/r or crew votes
no hate votes 4 all ya'll haters either
check in and i'll spit first

hey yo this me checkin in.........
spit that shit....................
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ok

I have prophesized ya future but its like memphis just to bleek, u flow wit osteoporosis just to weak claim ta elevate but ur just on top of a "mountain peak//
Ya Left ta seek fa greatness well u came to the right site, hottie reppin rb gonna put dreadlocks 'n ya head and define tight//
This cat killa couldn't come up wit sick shit, if he mixed expired anti-biotics and laxatives//
All your fake plastic shit I'll smoke you, while rippin' ya lungs apart like toxic cancer sticks(cigarettes)//
Cut ya up in sections jus another bitch in my collection, don’t bring ya shity verse and jus get off ya crew rectum//
killer’s sick?? Jus my spits go in different directions go to ur veins and cause infections, He think he hard when he just fantasizes nothin but guys errections//
Kid ya cant save ya self even if ya had floppy disks, cuz im comin ta beat ya down till ya retarded like kids in special Olympics//
killer jus impale your heart with your dick cuz thats the only way you can bang ya chest, Ill jus let ya hop on my body so u can claim u ride with the best//


Ok now I got to go

hey hottie7 u gonna spit or what
i will be waiting but if u dont spit soon then i wont spit for like 20 hours

pretty good, pretty good, nice finish, but there wasnt really any flow, lets just see how manic goes

somewhere - out there - is a 'brand new kitchen'//
go there - cook there - b4 'leave u bitchin'//
cryin cos u bin hit with my vicious verbal assult//
denial, at the trial "it really wasnt my fault //
i didnt mean to battle the manic i had no idea //
no clue that my punches were so weak and unclear "//
but there will be no courtroom, no judge, no jury//
u have already been sentenced to 10 lines of fury//
fury found at the hands of the killa//
manic has ripped you iller than iller//
i feel no mercy no reason to let u off//
walk into the back room and get yo self off//
you fucking wannab homaphrodite he bitch//
yo tuckin in yo cock while untuckin yo clevage//
u rap lacking intensity and word without a flow//
u talk in circles wit punches havin nowhere to go//
this is rap battles bitch get off my no noo-b forum//
cos at home, with ur motha, is ur only way you-b scorin//



*note* edit was changing "scored" to "score" in last line

ye a few typos in there and shit but i dont think the rap was affected.... fuk this im going to bed up in for votes!!!!!

KO is all i gotta say lol, u sorta got roasted hottie, but good battle still............................................. ...............................

this battle was kinda weak but im goin with hottie on this one.her opening was kinda weak and her ending wasnt much different either.the punches definately need work on both parts but manic needs it more.hottie wins because of her wordplay.slightly better.

vote-hottie7

uNo

yea i know my battle was fuked...didn't have enough time to do it lol...don't care though...uppin ppl...........

hottie started and finished weak but had a good punch or two. manic was flowin and started off stronger. keep up the work, both of you

VOTE ---> Manic
someone poll me up at http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=47710

kool pplz...... uppin for some votes!
checkout my battle with golden gramz i link u but i cant b fukd to

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