10-20 lines
first to 6 votes
3 votes strait auto win
no crew votes and no dr's
il spit first fo u

dawg its not smart to battle me// next time ask me for some shayd advice on becomin a better mc// cause with out me , u would still would be tryin to rhyme with sad// well when i win dont get mad// didnt ur fake ass mom always tell u to be glad// u coulda came to my side , but u lost the best oppurtunity chance u had// well now ur gonna stuck wit all the gay mcs.... thats just too bad// i know my rhymes might not have good vocabulary// at least im mature , not like u still waitin for the tooth fairy// well its time to get real// now bow down infront of me and kneel// uve probaly seen a lot of hot girl and fine asses... but ur to ugly and never got to feel// ur mixed up between gay and gayer .... if u joined me u wouldnt be all tied up// now when u witness these rhymes ur gonna be fried up//

The Forsaken one is now back on Track//
Pealin open your eyes like they coped out and smacked//
Up to the top like I'm leavin u nameless//
You pleadin for fame while u spittin so shamless//
I'm aimless, yet i can kill your whole army//
Spit all your lyrics, they'll just bounts right off me//
Like i am rubber and your a glue stick//
So bounts away from rap and get closer to "I Quit"//
Go have a fit, then find a new hobby//
And while your at it blow youself to comacozi//
hold up i evan got da gun rite here//
fuck wat u waitin fo, we ain't got all year//
Dawg i bet u could neva make it on er own//
Your 15 now, wat u gonna do wene u move from home//(profile)
Damn like your name puts it into perspective//
*steal a rappers name, and say u thought it was neglectited*//
Dawg come on give it up u mite aswell forfite//
I riped your ass so bad, u feel like tony Macfloure did//

Yo uppin fo votes yall. .................................................. ............................................

Yaz took this battle
shady wasnt bad for a newb
buttttttttttttttttt
u bOth need elevation rappadly
an go read da dictionary


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=87234

Yo shayD urs was aiight dawg.
Yaz urs was real good.
If i could vote i'd vote Yaz srry shayD....
.........{/]~{Uski}~[\}

uppin for votes yall.............................................. .............................................

Come on yall uppin fo votes and a reason for er vote.............................................. ...

EVERYONE VOTE!!!!! LOL!!!!! NOW!!!! lol............................................... ... plzzz...................

sorry dog but i think yaz took this one he look like he put more work into his verse, but neither one of ya'll used multis but keep postin ya'll

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MAC4LIFE, M.multis A.authority C.commitment,MFL
Pacaso mac the Baskin Robbins Street(hustla tryin to scoop up this ice and cream)

number one thing to me is you gotta use multis, ya'll look like ya'll put work into ya verse, but neither one of ya'll used multis but keep postin ya'll

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MAC4LIFE, M.multis A.authority C.commitment,MFL
Pacaso mac the Baskin Robbins Street(hustla tryin to scoop up this ice and cream)

to could neone who puts comments or nething vote on da poll, i need to get some my battles gone lol, like damn i got 3 on active and i just relized u can only have 2

eh yo the first owrd was Yo not to

multies... wat they like
damn bitch can, fuck wit this man, but like damn, does he wanna be ham/
beef wasin good enough for him, so u understand/
this boit changed his whole image cuz he couldn't get no fans....

i don't know dawg im kinda new at diss shit