tell me what yall think

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/mrspitmusic.htm

Stick to text......And you are white and you sayin Nigga????????

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^^^lol...well its good you elevatin from text to audio....niCe drop for ure first shit yo...jus bKeep at it..." fat people" wtf...lol...return the love...holla
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=45053

thanx yall for the info im open for suggestions if yall have any aight holla

shaky mic presensce.......beat was hella low......coo for your 1st one I guess........you use cool edit? sounds like you had a walkman next to the mic,lol

sounds like you just doing poetry.


it's not like you're spittin at all. like you reading all these bars off of a page.

maybe it's your beats.

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i dont know what it is im tryin this is my first time tryin to audio thats why its so shaky sorry yall i keep tryin aight holla

naw yo i aint got cool edit i got some otha wack shit i gotta play my beat and spit at the same time so that why voice like superiorly overpowers it my fault

LMAO @ "This is my first real ill shit...it's about fat people"

I ain't even going lie, the topic was horrible. It was like really bad rendition of Fat Bitch by 50 Cent.

Since it's your first audio I wasn't expecting anything too great.. but yeah your quality needs some major work. You definatley need to get something like Cool Edit or Acid Pro for starters. Even if you have crappy hardware you should be able to squeeze something that's listenable out, although you might need mess around a bit to figure it out.

Mic presence and delivery need some work cause you sounded half dead and I couldn't really tell if you were on beat or not cause I couldn't hear the beat.

Keep up and you'll get better... Check
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=45247

To tell you the truth. You suck dick. Second of all dawg me and you both white. Aight? You know your white right? You aint a Nigga. Quit sayin Nigga on yo track. Show some respect dawg. You aint hard cuz you sayin it. All you look like is anotha white boy sayin the word. Leave it alone dawg. ONE MORE TIME SO THIS DUMB ASS GETS IT THROUGH HIS TWISTED HEAD.

YOU ARE WHITE, QUIT SAYIN NIGGA!!! WHITE BOYS AINT SUPPOSED TO SAY THAT SHIT!

personally whit rap ill say what ever the fuck i please when the fuck i please os get off my nutz bitch!!!!!!!!!

^hes tough now...your audio sucked, you suck

Mr.Suck

you know what one im just startin out on audio so i will get better and i will improve and when i do you ass is mine

^yeah..i bet...holla at me when your DECENT