This is for the first stanza.

Remember, for this one. A minimum of TWO LINES. Maximum of FOUR Lines.

So TWO LINES MINIMUM

FOUR LINES MAXIMUM

Read the thread below for what it's all about.

Remember, this is for the first stanza only. So drop 2-4 lines. If you're following up on someone elses 2 lines (in which case, you drop two lines) then quote them.

Remember, don't go past the 4 lines. Keep it to one stanza (one stanza = 4 lines).

For example

Banana Man:

He fell into the river
Crying for food

Loafers wrote:

In reply to Banana man.

He fell into the river
crying for food
it swept him away
to the mirky jungles..


OR

Chicken Legs:

I want chicken tonight
No bones no skin
It's in my sight
Bring it here now


^^^Now you can't add onto that. As he's done 4 lines. So you can either write 2-4 lines of your own as a starter to this piece. Or just wait.. Remember, don't go out of the FIRST STANZA...DO NOT!!..

Sorry, just need to emphasise it. As it's bloody complicated..

simply a stoner serving style
as KFC makes me go wow
and so does a big bag of Tical
as chickin legs are gettin served now

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the one that watches the watchmen:

Are u a fat beast or summit'
all u do is talk about fooood?
and ur script isnt even good
its clean it isnt even rude

Jebus of Allah's Buddha!! (no offence anyone)

Those i put up were just spoofy examples. I made them so blatantly stupid and spoofy so people wouldn't confuse them with an actual starting stanza or a hint to how the essence or style of the piece should be. Ya dig?

i.e. Come up with something completely different. Write 4 lines that YOu think of. On a topic of YOUR choice. But nothing like what has been done above..

...

Okay i'll drop. Remember, you got to drop FIRST STANZAS too. This is MY first stanza. Then WE will choose which one goes first. After that, it'll be 2-4 lines for each person.

Injecting time into veins of justice
Beauty leaks tears at model's/criterion's mercy
As pulses race from raging vultures
So sink souls of waining/growing masses

Some of the lines can be swapped around. And i couldn't decide on two of the words.

So come up with your own FIRST STANZAS. Consisting of FOUR lines.

And then we will decide which one starts this all off.

The bronze skin becomes pale in darkness
Ears become soft from never wanting to hark this
A warning to the soul to escape from exclusion
And to be like them, but it's an illusion

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Quote:

Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.

images of grandeur cloud my focus,
swamin like locus, to devour my goals/
as if my eyes cried my blood on tha page
exhailin my life thru tha pen, inhailin tha day...

pain is love... stripes and swords...
tha god of the temple that fights with lords...

adored by tha mic, ignite tha light of former glory,
implore creed from tha core towards bored beats/
percieved as tha savior its too early 4 mournin,
hip hop is back this rap shyts been annoying...

Some real good ones so far...keep 'em coming people...then we can vote which one we'll start off with later...