i walk the Road to Success, turn at the bend
where Silence is Golden,
so i'll just Shut Up and become a Millionaire.
while skipping Fares on my Train of thought,
im side-Tracked and bored,
so i use my rhyme Patterns to Decorate my minds Walls.
get my Point across,
like Javelin Atheletes, but second guess -
do Locksmiths EVER find their Key to success?
im left depressed,
my hearts Black, take a Stab in the Dark
im only Pushing The Whip,
cause the fucking Car Wont Start.
im lifes loan shark,
a lone Shark among the Wave of hate and freight
who wont mistake no Flash in the Pan for a single Ray Of Light
i pray for life,
but hope for death. My minds depressed.
had a Date with Destiny,
but chose to pave the way to Success instead.
should i end it now? 'Cause we'll all die sometime, regardless
or turn over a new leaf, like autumn season started?
im cold hearted, cold shouldered, but my plan is. .
to be a World renowned Artist,
so its only right to use Mother earth as my Canvas.

like Javelin Atheletes, but second guess -
do Locksmiths EVER find their Key to success?haha that was good.............
nice topic now makes me think about the irony......peeps need ta stop sleepin

i pray for life,
but hope for death. My minds depressed.
had a Date with Destiny,

i love that line.... good shit. Loved all of this homez, from start to finish, excellent thread.

RB Legend?!

im left depressed,
my hearts Black, take a Stab in the Dark
im only Pushing The Whip,
cause the fucking Car Wont Start.
im lifes loan shark,
a lone Shark among the Wave of hate and freight
who wont mistake no Flash in the Pan for a single Ray Of Light
i pray for life,


Haven't seen much of your rhymes cause I mostly look at this board, but you have a style similar to mine...simple but to the point...good rhymes, made sense....overall good thread...props

No doubt man, get at me about a collab through PM or whatever. .

but hope for death. My minds depressed.
had a Date with Destiny,
but chose to pave the way to Success instead.
^^^Favorite Lines ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, Nice content ,, keep spittin,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,return da favour http://63.219.149.14/forum/showthre...&threadid=47654

No doubt fam. .
i'll get at you when i have time

the laon shark line was genius....cozim a lone shark...ill....nice vocab...the lcoksmith line,also genius...made ya thnk,this is the best hiphop ...shit that makes you feel and think...i can see the irony in this rhyme all ovedr it,the locksmith line was brilliant...will he ever find his key to sucess,i cant say much else vortex,this was nice as hell...lovin it dun....


peep my zions verse when you have the chance,tellme wha tyou think,im tryin it for legends also...

bismillah

DAMN man that shit was ill...........no beter words.... hit ma shit up will ya

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=47844

peace

Yeah, i'll get at you guys either tonight or tommorow night, i swear, im a little dogged with stuff right now, but i'll drop yours when i get a minute.

shit man - nice spit open mic is the place a noob looks to see whos hot and whos not. respect.

Thanks for the reply man, its good to know im appreciated.