alright, I hate fuckin' wit' weak bitches but they were askin' for it, so . . . . .

I’ll rip La Familia alphabetically and start wit’ Blunt MC to end his career first//
Thinkin’ he got a nice flow just cause everyone rags on his queer verse//
you should be committed dun, so don't even speak ILL of me even though I'm that type of dude//
admit it son, you just have dreams of spittin', you really have someone write for you//
and 10-15? i guess you can't even afford a good record, isn't that the truth blunt//
shit, I never smelt so much pussy since I was free-ballin' in your girl's loose cunt//
so why would you step to us, we’re really not the ones to come to when you feel you got somethin' to prove//
this must be premeditated suicide, but I guess he wasn't bluffin', he’s gonna go through with it too//
I ain't bullshittin', he's been pm'in' me sayin' he got stuck by a dude and doesn't know what to do//
if your wrists weren’t so weak I would’ve suggested a 22 for you to use//
it was comical the way he was confessin’ hysterically, now he wants to end his life lyrically//
seriously, you initiated this shit thinkin’ La Familia would come out a head and then spit so carelessly//
listen, you’re in a internet clique that’s composed of two chicks//
son, if you have back then now is a good time to run and get behind it//
cause with all that E your spine couldn’t possibly be strong enough//
just like we were comparin’ dicks, your intellect just can’t last long enough//
and all that oxycotin got you losin’ control of battles like proxy contests//
tryin’ to add your 2 cents on BRE but every word of your verse was sloppy nonsense//
and Enigmatic, you’re faker than OJ Simpson tryin’ to show that his hand didn’t fit in that glove//
face it you’re stuck, how can you talk shit when half of your wins are against the bitch I just berated above//
you must’ve been cursin’ Blunt’s verse when he posted, you knew from the beginnin’ you weren’t winnin’//
shit, after I’m done spittin’ this your head is gonna resemble your avatar the way that record is spinnin’//
I don’t even have to take this to front lines, those wins would be too easy to earn//
Cause ain’t nothin’ ill about your crew other than the fact that you guys pee and it burns//
My intellect is too demanding, your mere silence in this beef implies you understand me//
That’s why like the last episode of the Sopranos, this verse signals the disbanding of “ the family”//
You might be clueless so if you wanna get blazed again set it up and spit you’re weak rhymes out//
But you’ll each have to do it crewless cause I just phased your family’s line out//

. . . blazed . . .

4 sho dawg , , some dem mah fuckaz what we're about............Dem bitches are scarrd to come here..........................so fuck dem

uppin' for some feedback

tight tight i liked it sho them what were made of those fuckheads

haha.......gettin personal........nice one........nice vocab..............



hit my shit up called DEATH
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=47944

nice drop but it seemed like you kept an aa bb rhyme scheme through out the whole thing. also, the long bars kinda through off the flow but it was still a nice drop. keep spittin.......

this was decent verse na mean, it needs work when it comes to metaphors and mutlies tho, because it was so long it seemed hard to spit.

Blaze Em"..................Uppin for my Fam

...FUCK LA FAMILIA......i havnt seen any of them bitches on da site since they said shit bout us....lil pussys nice drop boy......fo sho they got blazed.........B.R.E. MUTHA FUCKAZ.......

damn! shorten ya bars a lil bit! unless you gonna put multitudes of multies... long bars with only the last words rhyming are monotonous and wack... put more multis the longer the bar
quick-to-spit, rip-ya-shit, smoke-a-dick, aint-wortha-lick... stuff like that throughout the line... instead of AA/BB try sometihng different like...
A......A
A..A..B
B..B..B
^^^that... anyways thats my two cents

yeah no doubt inspire know what he talkin,the long bars with the aa bb rhyme scheme was bit outta it....an this is yet another crew diss in the open mic forum....pfffftshshst....but it did make me laugh a bit...one of the better ones ive seen so far...

bismillah

i guess you can't even afford a good record, isn't that the truth blunt//
shit, I never smelt so much pussy since I was free-ballin' in your girl's loose cunt//
so why would you step to us, we’re really not the ones to come to when you feel you got somethin' to prove//
this must be premeditated suicide, but I guess he wasn't bluffin', he’s gonna go through with it too//

Likin this punch
if your wrists weren’t so weak I would’ve suggested a 22 for you to use//
it was comical the way he was confessin’ hysterically, now he wants to end his life lyrically//
seriously, you initiated this shit thinkin’ La Familia would come out a head and then spit so carelessly//
listen, you’re in a internet clique that’s composed of two chicks//
son, if you have back then now is a good time to run and get behind it//
cause with all that E your spine couldn’t possibly be strong enough//
just like we were comparin’ dicks, your intellect just can’t last long enough//

Good shit metaphysical one...Uppin The B.R.E for this one

nigga u cant fuck with them niggas right there. body u in the trunk son

Check it out niggas... I got some shit for ya too. We still here, don't worry 'bout all that. Ha, ha... this shit was whack. Fags... Who the fuck are you anyways, Metaphysical One. You roll with B.R.E.?