this is basically multies aight peep

i'm so hazardous-i could slap you bastards-backwards
so fast-that you faggots-couldn't fathom-the fact-that-the action-acually happened
and it just so happens-i happen-to have-gat-in my jacket
match with-a magnum-to blast in-any cat-who crosses past-my path

and it's certain-i've heard-some words-that'll make me dispurse
some curses-that hurt-worse-than a virgins-first-time twurkin-a person
i'm sick cause i'm workin-by incertin-nurses-in the back of some black hurses-and lurkin-and jerkin-purses-for a purpose-that seems worth it-which is a bezerk-ciruit of-circus-jerks-who flirt-with pussy shaped dirt-and splurge and merge-on dirty- t-shirts

to be continued

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shut the fuck up

even if i stutter i'll still sh-sh-shit on you/ pun

dead in middle of little of little italy
little did we know that we riddle
some middle man who didn't do ditally/ pun

Nice start let me know when you complete it -1-

ummmmmmmmmm Whack.....................In my Book it says that Metaphorz are Lines u use to describe another thing............For example..............Heres a metaphor..........................Yo I'm a Pump it up Just~Like~Joe Budden"/....................Thats a metaphor............and u didnt have any shit like that in ur drop....................SO this drop was senseless...........whack as hell.....change da topic............................And go read tha dictionary....................Lookup Metaphor.................And u will see da meaning................All u did was Add - - - - - - ,,,,,,,,,,,,,Thats all u did...................................I think You ment Wordplay..............Cause this drop had Good wordplay in it.....................But no Metaphors

maybe Bash is right
no matter fact dawg
good shit anyways

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drop wasn't too bad but you kinda lost me with all those happens. not to bad though. and bash, no hate or nothin but whats the diff between wordplay and metas?

metaphorically speaking..........ur WACK
but i dont diss with out my glock intact,
but ill never pop a cap in a mans back,
i will just pop my lyrics onto this track,
and mayb slip in a back hand slap,
or a double-hit-uppercut-combo attak,
wat i specialize in is rap....and skill in that is wat u lack,
you cant rap u dont even no english,
so shut the fuck up and stay the hell out of tha business,
^^^^tha rap game,
step get ur name put ta shame,
to be continued

aiyo i'm back to say i fucked up with the title i put the wrong fuckin lyrics on this shit and truthfully because i did that and just realized it i thought this shit was wack byond belief so fuck it i'm gonna edit this bullshit

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shut the fuck up

even if i stutter i'll still sh-sh-shit on you/ pun

dead in middle of little of little italy
little did we know that we riddle
some middle man who didn't do ditally/ pun

U had Tight wordplay

wake up ya''ll still sleepin on this

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shut the fuck up

even if i stutter i'll still sh-sh-shit on you/ pun

dead in middle of little of little italy
little did we know that we riddle
some middle man who didn't do ditally/ pun

this was a pretty ill piece i personally liked it....Keep spittin

thanx to those who are real enuff to reply still uppin for crit

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shut the fuck up

even if i stutter i'll still sh-sh-shit on you/ pun

dead in middle of little of little italy
little did we know that we riddle
some middle man who didn't do ditally/ pun

oh yea to that cat swift

of course you'll need your glock to be intact/
but it won't help when i jump on your back/
slap you with my sack and reattack/
by puncurin your lungs with the blunt side of an axe/
so if you hope wish and act like you can handle this cat/
start the battle thread up and we can settle this through rap/
BITCH

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shut the fuck up

even if i stutter i'll still sh-sh-shit on you/ pun

dead in middle of little of little italy
little did we know that we riddle
some middle man who didn't do ditally/ pun

DORKS

uppin for more replies on this piece yall

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shut the fuck up

even if i stutter i'll still sh-sh-shit on you/ pun

dead in middle of little of little italy
little did we know that we riddle
some middle man who didn't do ditally/ pun