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Old 05-18-03, 02:43 PM   #1
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Money Compensates Love

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Zen...War Activist

america. the land of the free is damned to me
i do not condone anarchy but i hate the greed
as i face the seas i pace and think lakes of green
every mans heaven seems to be only money seas
its funny to me. money makes the world go round
gravity is now only merchants that bring you down
take your money make you frown shake the ground
erase the sound fake the pound or is it the dollar
they rip you by the coller if you are a 1800 caller
dont falter .american express takes way to long
gay as a song by a homosexual musician dont let us
buy into his artistic measures because of preference
i turn to the heavens and simply ask exactly who i be
then i proceed to throw up 2 fingers. is it unity
dont think so. and not soon to be. truly i hate this land
life is as blank as sand. take what you can get
throw the rest away its shit. unless it can make profit
is this pro fit to hold it. life isnt fair. well no shit
hoes blow gifts i cant believe the men keep using
this ugly devil money maker called only prostitution.
love is dead. the world is fucked .love. there is no such.
thing in existance. theres is only a sentence with a label
people will go out at all costs. simply for food on the table
im not able to explain all the tales who what or why
but i know a piece of peace is like a slice of golden pie
so i sigh. nothings left. and the emptiness really hurts
i love you has turned to blatantly what it is....just 3 words



..not only in america . but all over the world.
money means more than love. women marry
for money. people sell sex for money. crack
they steal. they work . they do what they
dont want to do. for money....and thats it
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Old 05-18-03, 03:39 PM   #2
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illness.....liked the topic,liked th eending,liked the entire peice zen....and i see you like anticon,my respect no doubt...i liked how you spoke about it...like people cant help it almost,its as if money is what they live for,its like hte air they breathe an dth efood they eat type of thing...i really liked it

erase the sound fake the pound or is it the dollar
they rip you by the coller if you are a 1800 caller


nice

buy into his artistic measures because of preference
i turn to the heavens and simply ask exactly who i be
^^feelin it...

but i liked th eending the most that little talking part,was well said...

nice peice zen...

peep my zions verse if you ge tth etime...

bismillah
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Old 05-18-03, 03:44 PM   #3
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this is a piece by
me .. about some
bullshit going
on in my head...
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Old 05-18-03, 03:47 PM   #4
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driftwood is nice...

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Old 05-18-03, 03:49 PM   #5
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Damn Atetrack.
you seem like
a cool guy.
the ocean
drift is nice here
in hawaii.
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Old 05-18-03, 03:50 PM   #6
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This was Tha shit right here dawg ,, , , Tha tittle caught my attention , , ,I knew this shit would be ill , , I had to read it over and over , , Because it was Tight to read it , ,, ,, Nice ish dawg , , keep spittin , , , finally a newbie spits a hot track,,
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Old 05-18-03, 03:52 PM   #7
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yeah thank you
for your feedback
i appreciate it
i hope to see your
work sometime
soon...thank you
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Old 05-18-03, 03:55 PM   #8
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lmao...i do not know who you are,never have,and never will....you have no name....no name at all....ok.

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Old 05-18-03, 03:56 PM   #9
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yeah well i am a newbie...
kind of a no name type
guy...
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Old 05-18-03, 03:59 PM   #10
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lmao....yeah better stay that way...newbie...lmao...im jus playin dun.....you nameless guy person...yeah...

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Old 05-18-03, 04:52 PM   #11
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up in the air
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Old 05-18-03, 06:27 PM   #12
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upp-
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Old 05-19-03, 12:13 PM   #13
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QUIT SLEEPING...
theres like one good reply on this...
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Old 05-19-03, 12:19 PM   #14
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every mans heaven seems to be only money seas

Worrrrrrrrrrrdddd

this was refreshing...
nice to see some new talent here at RB..

This was amazing...
Wordplay..flow..vocab..and you stayed on the topic..illness...

great drop..

keep posting..

peace
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