KnightShade...

Knightshade Never Extend-The-Truth...Ya Ill Send-A-Deuce,
If I Could Explain The Emotion That These Words was Meant-To-Do,
Father Doin Drugs Thats Sad You Scare-Your-Kids,
Other Rejected Souls Wont Step Up Cuz Thats Where-I-Live,
Recycle-da-Strife...Its all Part Of One Cycle-Of-Life,
I Could End it Now Like Drunks With Rifles-and-Knives,
Shots Go Off and I Look around But Vision-Is-Dark,
Dismission-Of-Nark...Aiming Life At A Point Of Percision-and-Mark,
knightshadeLT: Lay Ya Head Down Kid Dont Cry-In-Ya-Sleep,
Just Throw A 40 In The Air For Those who Died-In-The-Streets,
And When It Comes To The Day Of Recognition Ill Be Standin By Many-Graces,
Plenty-Races...What Would The World Be If People Had Empty-Faces,
KnightShade The World Leader Workin on Fixin-This-World,
Teenage Kids On Drugs All They Thinkin Is Dickin-These-Girls,
Im Not A Political Man But I Know We Should Solve-The-Fight,
People Aint Seein The Light So Im Adjustin Optikals and 'Revolve-There-Sight'!!
Listen Im Not Like Other Netcees Im Not Scared To Get-Hurt,
But Goin To Gods Palace who's to say wat A Talented Vets-worth!!
People Are All Equal But You Gotta Subtract and Do-The-Math,
And If You Lead Followers In The Wrong Road I Will Lead to The-Path!!!
Rocky Roads And Harsh,Mountains Will Emerge And watch Peeps Yearn-There-Faith,
We All Apart Of Gods Green Earth and We all Have To Earn-a-Place,
My Life and The Lord Is All I Know And Im Screamin-At-The-Heavens,
I Take A Look At This World And KnightShade Beaming-At-The-Peasents!!!


Avalon...

Share and give... life to live... all given for silly jewels,
Av's searchin for Pops in citys... like Christina and Justin tours...
meaning is often pure... dropped... lost and dead to society,
sold souls to Adam and Ghandi... Handed Al Sharpton my heart for notoriety...
all inside of me... Av is proven the truth... Doctors killed in their youth,
if the proof is emceein now... we all clowns thus wisdom is new...
visions for who..? what... where and why can't I run,
Solely sought... and often bought... sweatin bullets to load guns...
reloaded the fun... we all walkin in programs,
programmed to walk... and talk with grams and fight with harsh hands...
like Marsh lands... it's gettin far to easy to get bayou,
when one grabs and steals... just to try you...
try to deny you... liberty and defeat,
9/11 happened all over the world since... 1776... after the death of BC...
Runnin they mouths... these dicks are takin trips through the south,
when the Bushes of pussies stay up north... creatin terrorism from the white house...


STAY STRONG..!

Knightshade tore that bitch up...........His verse was Madd sickkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk............Ill wordplay............Avalon's verse was aight..........He cameout lil whack............. overall u cats get a 7/10................Becausese avalon didnt Spit a hot verse............Return da favour ,,, checkout my boy's drop http://63.219.149.14/forum/showthre...4458#post464458

Good Drop Peeps......Avvy, i Was Feelin Ya Wordplay, Complexity.....All That Shit.....Knight, I Was Madd Feelin Ya Multi's Duke......Dope Ass Piece/Collab, Ya'll Stay Up

*wonders if he even understood the verse...*

What Are Yall Talkin bout?......Knight U Came Nice....Real Nice........I Felt Every Part Of UR Lines.....Av Came Nice Too.....His Verses Were Dope......U Gotta Feel Those Rhymes Not Just Read It....Both Of Yall Came Out The Same.....Both Of Yall Repped.....1

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Blessed wit Skillz

yeah tht tore shit up and u really cant have one part without the other or the flow is just messed up and a lil confusing, but together theyre fucking awsome

avalon, i loved your shit, sorry i didnt stay on IM last nite but the woman wanted me lol, uppin this bitch it deserves alot more attention, im really feelin ya verse av i wana do more collabs wit'cha !

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LowerTown's Finest

hmm...

exactly what you would expect from these two....

would love to hear an audio verson of this........

anyhow peep my open mic as well... my fisrt one

Yo both came hot on this one
Knight blew me away wit his multies, great flow an' wordplay

"And If You Lead Followers In The Wrong Road I Will Lead to The-Path!!!
Rocky Roads And Harsh,Mountains Will Emerge And watch Peeps Yearn-There-Faith,
We All Apart Of Gods Green Earth and We all Have To Earn-a-Place,
My Life and The Lord Is All I Know And Im Screamin-At-The-Heavens,
I Take A Look At This World And KnightShade Beaming-At-The-Peasents!!!"

Rounded the end of really nicey, tight stuff.

Av Wordplay Was spot,
flowed well and had a good element of complexity.

"meaning is often pure... dropped... lost and dead to society,
sold souls to Adam and Ghandi... Handed Al Sharpton my heart for notoriety..."
Nice^^

"Solely sought... and often bought... sweatin bullets to load guns...
reloaded the fun... we all walkin in programs,
programmed to walk... and talk with grams and fight with harsh hands..."
Liked alot^^

Overall this piece was tight, well put together
and is madd to read

9/10

Good piece

-out-

thank you for the feed back.

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LowerTown's Finest

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LowerTown's Finest

this shit was ill, both ya came nice, ya should keep droppin fire in here

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Only God can judge me, Who THE FUCK IS YOU?!

ill verses from both of yall,good complements of style,no doubt well written,lovin avalon`s verse,the style is ill...knighshade using the mad multies to full effect...had a good story,motive,point thing...stay strong through hardship an such,god an death,thats wha ti thgouht it was nayway...but if im wrong.apologies

when the Bushes of pussies stay up north... creatin terrorism from the white house
^^excellent ending

Av's searchin for Pops in citys... like Christina and Justin tours...
meaning is often pure... dropped... lost and dead to society,
^^those lines were tight,the first...made me laugh,then the second was serous,and made me think abou tshit...avalon be righ tbaou t,pure meanign being overloked like noone cares,shits ill...

If I Could Explain The Emotion That These Words was Meant-To-Do,
^^nice line,mad correct


Plenty-Races...What Would The World Be If People Had Empty-Faces,
^^shits mad true,another nice line from knightshade...



My Life and The Lord Is All I Know And Im Screamin-At-The-Heavens,
^^my favourite line,shit was awesome,great ending,the looking down on th elight ont he peasnts was niceness straight after this line...


it was an ill spit from oth yall,nice vocab,good multies,emotion came through,shit was ill...



can you return the favour on myself and mentills collab..its being mad slept on...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=49885


bismillah

this is perfection 10/10 both showing pure skill and emotion
keep at it
-Tory