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Monster
IP: D1CC BEB7
My pain my struggle my life I feel fiery/
The hole I dig myself in and Im buried/ Seems like people want to see me fail/ My eyes is full of fire like Im from the depths of hell/ I have no empathy for humanity that cant face reality/ That want me to change rearrange my whole personality/ Its not happening the monster in me wont let me rejoice or feel pain/ You take advantage I will slash and disregard your remains/ They wont stop pestering tombstone with brief lettering/ He was a good man loving father and friend love his family/ They know Im a monster the way I tear up the human anatemy/ Life I dont conserve when they dont deserve/ The monster is me I accept the force I feel the monster in my heart and my soul/ The monster is my heart other than that my heart is cold/ I keep the monster in me to show I aint no push ova/ I am a demon seed my monsterous actions will show ya/ When you trying to ride on me and you wonder why Im still here/ Im a monster respect honor and realize the monster protects me I have no fear/ |
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IP: 552E 9839
pretty safe rhyme soprano.
pretty good flow for the most part, i kinda lost it a couple parts "Life I dont conserve when they dont deserve/ The monster is me I accept the force I feel the monster in my heart and my soul/" good vocab and punchlines keep it up |
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IP: 552E 9839
yo reply to my piece in open mic
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BANNED for biting
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IP: FF98 53B8
This drop was Ill dawg , , ,I really liked tha content , , Man ill fuckin piece,,,,,,,,,I was feelin it to da fullest.................B-Red u a mutha fuckin dumbass........................U told him that he had Good punchlines , , ,and this drop didnt have no Punchlines.....................B-Red do u even kno wat a punchline is
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