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Old 05-23-03, 04:51 PM   #1
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Monster

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My pain my struggle my life I feel fiery/
The hole I dig myself in and Im buried/
Seems like people want to see me fail/
My eyes is full of fire like Im from the depths of hell/
I have no empathy for humanity that cant face reality/
That want me to change rearrange my whole personality/
Its not happening the monster in me wont let me rejoice or feel pain/
You take advantage I will slash and disregard your remains/
They wont stop pestering tombstone with brief lettering/
He was a good man loving father and friend love his family/
They know Im a monster the way I tear up the human anatemy/
Life I dont conserve when they dont deserve/
The monster is me I accept the force I feel the monster in my heart and my soul/
The monster is my heart other than that my heart is cold/
I keep the monster in me to show I aint no push ova/
I am a demon seed my monsterous actions will show ya/
When you trying to ride on me and you wonder why Im still here/
Im a monster respect honor and realize the monster protects me I have no fear/
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Old 05-23-03, 05:18 PM   #2
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pretty safe rhyme soprano.
pretty good flow for the most part, i kinda lost it a couple parts
"Life I dont conserve when they dont deserve/
The monster is me I accept the force I feel the monster in my heart and my soul/"
good vocab and punchlines keep it up
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Old 05-23-03, 05:18 PM   #3
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yo reply to my piece in open mic
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Old 05-23-03, 05:36 PM   #4
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This drop was Ill dawg , , ,I really liked tha content , , Man ill fuckin piece,,,,,,,,,I was feelin it to da fullest.................B-Red u a mutha fuckin dumbass........................U told him that he had Good punchlines , , ,and this drop didnt have no Punchlines.....................B-Red do u even kno wat a punchline is
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