I've been soul searchin for about seven years
lookin for answers in the blood sweat and tears
it appears now that my efforts were all in vain
why must we be born into a world full of pain?
my brain cant ascertain the logic of this domain
its such a strain tryin to go against the grain
i gave up long ago when i started gettin restless
now im drowning in a sea of inevitabe darkness
distressed cause of the drug dealing and stealing
feeling that any minute this ish will hit the ceiling
killing is not an option just a necesity of survival
even though it is condemned by the holy bible
i try to do the right thing but the path is winding
the lord keeps calling for me but im not listening
my hearing is impaired cause im sinkin into sin
its unescapable i can already sense it closing in
reminisin about all the terrible things ive seen
wishin that one day i would awake from this dream
it truly seems that theres no hope left to grasp
the darkness overwhelms me as i suddenly gasp
my God why have you forsaken me i cruely ask
there was no answer as i breathed my last...

... theres no cure for eternal sadness
and no end to the maze of madness...

Nice drop man

thks, lookin for some more comments/feedback...

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I tried to rewind time but my hindsight is blind

hey man that was solid, but i think its best feature was that u kept good flow, wordplay, etc BUT u managed to remain saying shit that was thought out and made me think a bit.
Great Stuff

Thats some nice ish Mind, reppin the Crew Nice.....Keep it up dun.

.....Pz.....

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word, thks manic and mead

uppin...

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I tried to rewind time but my hindsight is blind

Good shit......tha only thing i got ta bitch about is the fact that this topic was sorta played out and done already.....but thats not what im judgin.....your flow was right on......all that shit.....nice drop man

thks man, yea this was for the R.B.T.L. and the topic was drowning, so i didnt have a choice on the topic... decided to post it in here jsut to see what yall thought.

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I tried to rewind time but my hindsight is blind

uppin...

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Nice flow.. great shit..

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Ja Rule???

pretty ill content wise and nice vocab and shit, style wise it was simple as it comes, and sometimes wavered, all in all i liked it but keep elevatin, try and write hared rhymes all tha time and ur simple story tellin ones will be tha much better

hit up my drop for tha woman will ya

....i def. felt dat shit.....nice drop bro........

word, thks for all the replies

caspah, yea i see what u sayin, ill work on it, and ima check your drop

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I tried to rewind time but my hindsight is blind

yeh dat was aight, if it was real

good subject matter