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Old 05-22-03, 08:52 PM   #1
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...:::Reppin Warlords Freestyle:::...

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I wrote this off the eminem beat dissin benzino...so try to feel it..starts off kinda simple but gets better............


Now that we got the throne, mutherfuckers scared to turn there micro-phones on/
so they roam alone, shook-bad, everything a crew need, we got...so they just sittin there wishin what they had/
they'll never surpass the war-lords, these stupid fuckz still recruitin...they just collectin more rapbattle trash/
so warlords had to bring the heavy-duty bags, to keep the board clean from these net fags/
ha ha...i just sit back and laugh, at the TRAITORS, who wanted to come back and join later/

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Haters get sprayed wit ever ounce of lead, its not 'posion', its the warlords "radien" like the 'radiers' wit a mass of killz to spread/
believe what i said, i'all murder you now, and bring you back from the dead, just to ask you do satan got a flaming-beard/
yea, you standing there, looking like we not aware, so we gotta brand these queers for beefing against fear/
how could you compare, to deadly strikes, and yall fuckz only 'over-crossing' yall 'boundaries' when yall balling in yall air-NIKES/
im starttin fire-fights, and put them back out wit dirt, how you going to merk the invuernable?.....when we can't be hurt/
you pussy's in SKIRTS, thats the only reason we LOOK UP TO YOU since your untime-ly birth/
call us the worst on the board and we'll rep it proud n loud, then growl n bite yo ass, and digest you, then shit on you wit elagance&style/
damn WOW, im glad to rep the lords of war, alpha took the vow of loyalty...that basically mean i swore to leave your asshole tore/
so when i say im give you a good POUNDING...i mean wit my fist...im not a fag...but im NUTTZ, and i'all pulverize your magic MOUNTAINZ/
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Old 05-22-03, 09:14 PM   #2
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sick shit homie u held it down no doubt... u repped ur crew to tha fullest nah mean... i liked dis whole piece.... keep doin ur shit


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Old 05-22-03, 09:16 PM   #3
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o0o0o0o reppin...warlords....nice just fam....nice nice...Keep spittin, this shit was ill.......Keep it up...GO check out my shit...."Make them listen"
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Old 05-22-03, 09:25 PM   #4
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ha !....good shit dawg.....and yur sig is crackin me up..........
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Old 05-22-03, 09:51 PM   #5
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WAR MOTHAFUCKIN LORDS 2 the FULLEST fam WORDPLAY .....WUS AMAZING......WOW....Dawg U should try to do this on Audio
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Old 05-22-03, 10:01 PM   #6
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lol @ fake sigs crackin people up

hot flow tho.. better then i thought =/
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Old 05-22-03, 10:05 PM   #7
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thanx for the feedback
duke the thread is up...in front lines
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Old 05-22-03, 11:26 PM   #8
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Ill piece........
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Old 05-22-03, 11:50 PM   #9
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i'm sorry but i just wasn't feel'n this that much...no hate or nuff'n...
but the flow of this was quite off/choppy....

sum bars were longer than others...just wasn't all that great...but an ok drop....

your last 2 lines i was totally not feel'n...had no real reason to be the end of this piece....

well whatever...

rat'n...6/10

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Old 05-23-03, 09:07 AM   #10
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Illness fam...

feelin this..

keep dropin gems homes..
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Old 05-23-03, 12:32 PM   #11
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Illness.........

Nice shit fam

Good to see you reppin to tha full
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Old 05-23-03, 12:45 PM   #12
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Hey let me get a battle in dis mug
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