10-15 lines
first to 5 or 3-0 KO
no dr, hata, or crew votes

i'm bringing the heat, the fire and flames
hope you've got your bling on your insurence claims
cause when I approach your ice is gonna melt
i'm spitting the hottest rhymes that ya'll ever have felt

putting down my rhymes, almost daily
one step closer you'll taste my shillalah
now i know i'm not irish, but I just like the word
taking from other cultures, haven't you heard?
it's the american way, taking and calling it our own
hell, half the clothes we're wearing are asian-kid sewn

In mental stature, you're a liliputian
needing a high-chair for your electric execution
you're down, and I kick you in the face
cause in this rap game, mercy has no place

Now pick yourself up, don't give up just yet,
I'm not done spitting my vitriolic words on the 'net
all right, I changed my mind I'll let you catch your breath
the police are here to arrest me for your lyrical death.

Aww naw you callin out suspicous, i'm diggin ditches for all yall bitches/
I'm bringin the rain to put out chur flame, your lyrics was lame/
look at chur fuckin name, good dictator/
a-ten-hut, get in tha prison postition, i bet this nigga got dick in his vision/
leave my lyrics up to the judges decision, just wait listen/
my lyrics leave you up to suspicion, got chur brain itchin/
i bet chu all that shit you wrote was pre-written, fuck what you spittin/
im that ill nigga that cook brains in ya kitchen, ya ma's wonderin why ya missin/
i dont see any similarity, im drivin around tryin to find out where tha cemetary be, cuz im tryin to bury thee/
im so dangerous, they got me on my own island like tha statue of liberty/
cut cha up, put cha in a box, send it to ya kin folk, special delivery/
I bet chu amazed and dazed by all tha wayz this rap rage, i could go on for dayz, but its time to put ur ass in tha grave....

Aight sorry it took so long had some shit to slang, let the votes roll.....................................

well, I took a nap and then checked on the page
and now my vision is clouded, but not cause of rage
reading your lines left my eyes feeling strained
read it over and over, but there's shit unexplained

unlike suspicious I rhyme about what I know to be true
and starting the battle i didn't know shit about you
but you'd be surprised what one can learn from your post
like an elementry education is one thing you cant boast

with your misspelling skills, it's true I can't compete
but I'll say "u suxx0r & st@rt r|-|y|\/|1|\|g n l33t"
navigating your words is like swimming in a bayou
with a fly in my ear claiming to punch like ryu

"chur"-this and "chu"-that please make that shit stop
you're making me sick having to ingest all that slop

suspsious won.. cuz good dictator you were talkin about american ways and shit... while he just clownin you....

do me a favor (not hate votes, vote honestly) and hit up these, any of em or all of em.. whateva u got time 4:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=46813
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=46443
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=46068
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=46007

suspicous won this. kids a newbie but he got a game to bring to the table. good battle, but suspicous came much harder.

Persianplaya408, I dont have a problem with "clownin", but I need something to rap about. When I start, especially against someone I dont know anything about, my mind wanders. My best shit comes in the long haul, when I have something concrete to attack.
Don't cast judgement till its over.

Suspicious, you've got at least 8-10 hours til I can come back so if I go silent its for a good reason.

oh ok, i thought yall just wanted to go once... sorry man.. ill vote it again later... i dint mean to vote when its not over... my fault

Aight i guess it wasnt explained to good dictator, but this was only a one round battle......... lets get some more votes so we can end this

Damn my boy, just stomp this bitches ass....................................!

it was an aight battle but suspicous came outta tha dark and murdered this cat....

...............uppin for votes...............
...............uppin for votes...............

"lets end this"

ay yo, lets get some votes ppl, hit this up, ill return tha favor............................................. ........

check my shit out and ill come back
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=49234

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=49203

vote = suspicious

dictator.. you wasnt even battlin him, you gotta diss dude, you was talkin bout some other shit

yall peep my battle.. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=49412 good look