same rules



u spittin first
cosu challeneged
im not gunna run away
ill be here all night
im not scared of a challenge
expecially frum some new-b

I'm bringing poisonous spits in large amounts/
The first round's over, you shoulda been down for the count/
I'm gonna whip your ass so bad that you'll beg Redemption to permanately ban your account//

Oh, you're offended I compared you to Blake?/
You shouldn't be angry. Aren't you two mates/
Your style doesn't compare, I keep it rawer than uncooked steak/
You betta use that hand to write if I give you a handshake/
Do I need to translate?/
I think you lost your mind when your period ran late//

~here's the scenario. Dig it...~

You had just gotten home from Blake's house/
He gave you more meat than Outback Steakhouse/
After he was finished with you, you got ate out/
He said your pus smells like more sushi than Chinese takeout//

~Back to the matter at hand~

You've run out, boy. You betta bring your reserves/
I'm too sick wit the flows, boy. I'm a demon with words//

Don't get mad at me cuz my flow's smooth/
I told you. I can do this old school//

1, 2, 3, to the 4/
I bring more heat than the sun's core/
I'll have you singing like 3LW "No more"//

On this mic you'll left with Stitches/
And I don't mean Lilo's pet. My flows are malicious//

I'll punch you in the stomache so hard, your nose will be in your ass crack/
Those wack raps you posted will do nuthin but get your wack ass slapped.//

Where did you get idea that I was hating on you?/
I'll walk over to your house, stomp a mudhole in you, and THEN take your Playstation 2.//

Exit this challenge a fanboy, a wannabe, a groupie, a Stan/
Bash your head with a frying pan, slap you with your own hand.//

You're rapping like a generic version of lil Wayne/
This ain't no game, you lame. Don't go against the grain//

I got styles you can't tame. Look at this legacy I built/
You didn't build anything but mounds of filth.//

I'm too sick. I'll leave you more green than Al/
You singing "Let's Stay Together"? Two seconds ago you were talking foul!!/
I'll twist your neck around 180 degrees but you're not an owl/
You have no style, look at you, you little crack child//

Whatchu need to prove? I never had no beef withchu/
You f*ckin pikachu. You wish you could beat me, dude//

I'm pumped up. Verbal steroids, lyrical serotonin/
You won't survive this adrenaline rush. I'm outlasting all opponents.//

You need to take your rhymes and throw em out the window./
I'll punch you in your face and make you bend back worse than limbo./
Play you like Super Nintendo.//

You and some guy were arguing over Blake in the back of the movie Isle/



Just in case you dident know, blake is a gay kid at our school that comes on to everyone.

before i spit....
maybe you should try spittin about shit people can relate too...not some gay kid at your school...

and holy shit kid...that shit was longer den ya first
you need calm down and stick wit like 25 lines...
god fuckin damn

iiight ill post in a minute...i wanna read his long ass verse

...*Grabs- Mic* ..
*stares- at -ying*


This Ying Kid Wants Another Chance, Acting Like Like A 'Micless-Emcee' Who Dont Understand/
...........Your Just Like A 'Shovel And Bucketless' Kid At The Beach, Who's Surrounded By Sand/
Your "up-set", "pist-off", because you not takin seriously/
...........ill leave you "un-dressed", "fucked-up", and wondering dileriously/
You 'wack'er-then-'a-mole' Lost in an arcade surround by bats/ (wac-a-mole)
...........More Desprete then the poor rapper beggin people fer contacts/ *haha*
Your Whole Verse Made Biting-sound-''good'', and it was screamin pre-written/
...........You woulda have been better off making your whole verse 'biten'/
Your Not Origanal, You Sound Like 'another' Gay Boy Band Group/
...........Your Dumber- then- a -dog, chasing his tail, still not realizing hes spinning in a loop/
Dont even let me begin on why you begged not to spit first/
...........Yeah Right I'm Going To Run Away, You Just Lost So Many Times, So Spitin First Fer You Is cursed/
Shit, I read your other verse and they was longer then the fuckin bi'ble'/
...........I could merely spit-2-lines and you'd still need a map fer 'survivle'/
And kid, try to stick with maybe maximum 30 lines/
...........talkin about some blake faggot, but from what i herd he's yours, so he cant be mine/
you travel from forum to forum like you lost/
...........ima wip up, and 'rip-up' this verse, treat you like a jew in holocost/(haha)
So Next Time We Battle, Make Sure Your gunna Win. Before your brag/
...........And Make Sure You Know Who Your Dealing With, Before You Make Rumors Bout Me And Your Boy Freind (Blake) The Fag/

You Have Just Been Merked...


____A cowards dies a thousand deaths, a solider dies but one___
*2 pac*

Aiigh people, ^^^^^ uppin Fer Votes...^^^^^

Alright people now lets vote, how many votes until the voteing thing is closed? I am just wondering because my other stie does it by judges and not votes.

Its first to 5 votes wins

Still uppin fer votes people
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Just try posting a thread tell them to vote, or just go to other threads and tell them to come in here and vote, that would make it faster.

r u kiddin...30 minbutes and no votes
mfg god
VOTGE!!!!!!!!!!!
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Alright now this is getting really annoying, I doubt that anyone has gone this long with out getting any votes, this is starting to get really stupid.

yo do me a favor an drop a honest vote on dis battle...bein slept on...
I shall replace dis post wit an honest vote once ya drop ya shit on mine thanks...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=55585

ill it this up when you both drop, can you hit this whyle you wait?
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...6463#post516463

yo can u vote on this and be honest cuz this kid asking people to vote for him. and i'll come back and vote on this battle.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=1

still no votes...
Carson jet.,..i tired...
but the fucking thing wont let me post...
maybe i needa get off aol
leme try
meanwhile.
give me an honest vote on this

Alright, don't you have at least 100 posts to be able to vote? Because that doesent apply to me. So K just go vote on then so we can get some please.