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yo u tend ta spit within tha wrongside of da darkforce//
but ya interveining wit a jedi that dun chose da tight course//
dark wit a force.....a force of remorse, for battling wit me, strangled an entangled from my lyrical source//
sorcery witchcrafts upon u like a project in da night//
scared to turn out da light, best defense i keep u within in range, in my sight//
creepin like an emcee sniper... got ya keys deep inscripted.... feared to type//

3-1 hittin me like ya course wont be swayed//
lay ya body in da lake, fishes feining on ya corpse...for days on days...ya body lays.. decayed//
tried ta follow thru wit a hit but ya banged it slightly foul//
beggin for reverse when i slam str8 inta each an every vowel//
try an bak it up...but ya sloppin like a dampened towel//
rappin like news reporter's exchanging notes//
lyricly un-sound..re-used, re-iterating an slightly changing once recorded quotes//
couldnt get a grant of marraige to ur verse if u asked for blessing's from da pope//
physicly, metaphysicly, or prolyphicly,.. this win u dealt to me....ur gonna have to cope....//
actin like a crackfeind at da crime scene who dun planted all da dope//
put ya in emcee confinment, implanted within for only one assignment, so dont forget to grab da soap//LOL...

Next//....

if u supposed 2 be sick with the words, nigga, i must be Terminally Ill/
u crossin a tank, Straped W/Cannons, "hardware applause"; i "Clap with hammers",
aim @ ya dome & light up ya 'pumpkin' like aJack-O-Lantern/
yall niggas know i'm Fly When I Rock Shit,
hittin 'Jet' hard enough 2 eject his brain from his skull quicka than 'Carson' From His Own Cockpit/
only thing in Store 2 Witness is my horridly Morbid Sickness,
as i demonstrate how Slaughterin niggas like u is why i'm employed, 2 keep da Morgues In Business!/
it's as Easy as That--i'm feasibly breezin on this feeble & Measily Cat,
& i'm not even Hungry, so why would Carson wanna Feed me His Scraps?/(lyrics)
Skript the Murderous Version, slicin u with the Words of A Surgeon,
drawin blood like i'm Servin A Virgin; leavin this bitch Submerged in it, Gurglin/
u faggot ass bitch u gaggin, It's hopeless, Ya boyfriends tearin up your throat wit his dick, its Ferocious
he's detachin the plaque from the Back of ya Molars while I'm Carefully Craftin my Opus/
hey carson ! i bring heat like a blacksmith, leave ya skin Scorchin in Flames/
meltin u down 2 Hawk ya Remains @ pawnshops as Sparklin Chains/
Now you can drop ya Gangsta Talk, or flip to an Intellectual Thesis
Cuz I just got in your Ass like a Homosexual's Penis

uppin for votes.....Good shit tho Carson.........................
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...0785#post460785

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treach....vote on da poll pleaz.....thnx dogg..................................
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uppin for votes.......I'll return da favor...........................................
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vote for this shit pleaz....we will both return da fuckin favor............................................. .............................

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eyy well this was a good battle but ima have to give this one to Carson ...... he had some good lines ........ dark came in a bit .... ummm ....... well simple ....... but he had some good shiot near the bottom.... so anyways ma vote goes to Carson for having some goos punches that actually hit dark pretty hard ...................
......... anyways ... go check ma battle out wit the massakist

vote carsonjet

yo nice battle, but i like dark force, he came harder and had better wordplay, tight 1
hit up my battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=49738

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...1185#post461185


come vote holla~

tight verse darkforce......liked it alot.....good battle......uppin for votes...do da de dah 100 fukin character's la de de da

ima go wit carson on this one, dark was a bit weak at the beginning, got tight at end though so was hard decision, gin wit carson as he had consistancy throughout his whole verse....
no hate....... vote: carson
peace