10 lines, ill keep some up real quick

my verse is twisted cause im spittin while im bent//
u da only dumb fuck whos rappin name is his goverment//
whered u get da 18 in ya name, maybe dats da age u'll be bald//
i'll stop u in ya tracks like a public bathroom dog, u jus stalled//
my 9 touchin ya grill aint the only COCKed thing u had in ya mouth//
wettin ya whole crew like t-mac in a drought//
lookin at u newbs i realizzed ya are all da same//
i got all ya jumpin at shots like a playoff game//
afta dis battle i consider u a dude, cuz at effort u put up da most//
like casper, ya friendly but once u hit wit da toast, ya ass is ghost//

quick 10 lines, and i want da same from u

ill vote this when dominick drops.

could you hit up my battle against Vaccine, thanks. Holla

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yo takeova.. ill hit this when dominick posts his shit..
meanwhile vote on my battle vs dominick
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THIS FAGGOT KEEPS PMING ME,SAYING DOM YOU GOT NO GAME WHEN THIS DUMB FUCK DID'NT PUT NO SPACE BETWEEN HIS USER NAME!THIS LOSERS LAME,ANDIMA BRUISE THIS DAME WITH VOTES CRASHING CAUSE ILL PUT HIM OUT AFTER 3...KINDA LIKE WWE WRESTLING MATCHES.WASSUP WITH THESE FAGGOTS?MUST BE JUMPING FROM EZ BOARDS CAUSE THE ONLY THUNG SUCKING MORE THAN THIS KID IS CRACK WHORES!IM HALF ASSING THIS BATTLE,WONDER WHY-CHECK YA POST COUNT ADD THE FACT YOU CANT RAP,THIS HERBS SMOKED LIKE A ROLLED OUNCE!IM ABOUT TO BOUNCE,BUT BEFORE I GO KNOW THAT I MURDERED YOU CAUSE BITCH ID THROW MORE PERSONAL SHIT-BUT IVE NEVER FUCKING HEARD OF YOU!!!!!!!!!!!

ok for one, u should format ya verses a little differnet, when its in paragraph form, u cant read shit, and u had only one good line but its all gravy, im not votin, so lets get dis shit on da road

WHATS HAPPING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

hey takeova u dropped some good shit here, probably would have won had this guy known what he was doin anyway
do me a favor and place a pole vote at...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=50324

YO YOU SIT IT UP BITCH DONT BLAME THAT ON ME PUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

Hmm Oky Doky...Takeova...Enuff Said
Return the favor please

Vote honestly: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=50156

.................................................. ......................................... YO TAKEOVA........................... go CHECK OUT UR CALL OUT............

Yea, thatakeova is right, YOU NEED TO change the way you write ur shit. Besides that, the take ova just murdered ya dude. NO ? bout it.
vote = take

Umm...Both were weak but takeova got it, not by much though...

lookin at u newbs i realizzed ya are all da same//

^^^Thats coz you always verse wack ones....

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